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Poems - Just A Thought

Just A Thought

by Phoebe

I am a quiet, little thought
I live inside your mind
I’m never very far away
Just think - and me you’ll find

We have a friendship you and I
That we have made our own
It’s strong and solid as a rock
And over time has grown

You never will be free of me
I’m with you night and day
I tell you now, this little thought
Is here with you to stay

You only have to think of me
There’s nothing more to say
I’m just a quiet, little thought
That’s just a thought away.

~Phoebe~

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Sunday, May 27, 2012 (16:15:23)

A very thoughtful piece, easy flowing as one reads with a
Perfect rhyming decor

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, May 28, 2012 (02:37:46)

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Sunday, May 27, 2012 (18:37:10)

Phoebe, I really love the "thought" of this one - sorry, couldn't help myself. Seriously, your rhymes are perfect and I particularly love your last lines:

"I'm just a quiet littel thought
That's just a thought away"

Love it!!

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, May 28, 2012 (02:39:06)

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Sunday, May 27, 2012 (21:15:41)

You’re just a little jingle
You’re there in my head
You haunt my every thought
And this is what you said… I wonder where the yellow went when you brush your teeth with pepsodent.

Now don't let that keep you awake. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, May 28, 2012 (02:40:36)

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by jalencewicz86 on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 (04:12:49)

Really, really enjoyed this. simple vocabulary and extremely sophisticated writing. Made my night Smile

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Re: Just A Thought (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Tuesday, May 29, 2012 (15:09:15)

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