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Make Mine Mature

by Phoebe

There is something profound
about a man who’s been round
With his silver hair and weathered face
Even if he has lost all his fabulous locks
Other things those can easily replace

His face may be lined with the passage of time
But each line has a story to tell
And in the mature, there’s one thing for sure;
There is many a yarn they can sell

A man’s not a pup, from his mid forties up
Toward sixty I think he’s so cool
He’s past fingering that testosterone thing
And there’s no one can call him a fool.

As well as all that he’s a master of chat
With a smooth line to charm all the “birds”
Never verbally weak, at his sexual peak
Winning hearts with his mastery of words

Don’t give me a home
where the young bucks all roam
I like my men aged, like fine wine
Much rather prefer, that mature kind of Sir
who knows how to give me a good time!

~Phoebe~

from 09/2010





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Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (02:30:02)
Enjoyable read Phoebe, love the perfect rhymes as always, sadly I don't quite fall into that age range yet. But I'm getting the wrinkles though. Laughing

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    Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, May 30, 2012 (08:35:24)
    Laughing Aww Wayne, you'd be devastating at any age wrinkles and all, glad you enjoyed the fun write.. Very Happy Phoebe

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Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (02:12:27)
you stir my heart and stimulate minds
with words so smart and double rhyme lines
taste and talent beyond your years
the ways you tell it brings me cheer

your biggest fan...xoxoxo

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    Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (05:01:14)
    My poems are designed, with someone in mind
    he's someone I deeply admire
    he brightens my day, in every way
    with comments that always inspire.. Very Happy xoxoxo

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Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (03:49:41)
G'day Phoebe...
How did I miss this poem? You make us old geriatrics feel like we're spring chickens again...until.
Thank you Phoebe for your wish list.
Lindsay

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    Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (04:37:06)
    Awwww, no way are you a geriatric, for goodness sakes....you're absolutely on that fine wine list.. Wink Smile Phoebe

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Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (12:46:24)
ha ha. speaking as a fine 1789 brandy i appreciatte it - nice one
whipi - i'm not mature...it's just my knees ha ha - paul and the unmatured pup.

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    Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (15:22:30)
    You are totally Peter Pan incarnate Paora...you're just lucky to have Jess to keep an eye on those fly by night habits of yours... Wink Feebs..

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Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Thursday, May 31, 2012 (21:56:54)
Nice Poem! I give this a fine ten and a heart too. My silver haired beloved is as sexy as can be, and as romantic too. Lucky me! Lucky you if you have one too. Hugs and Blessings, Tasha

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    Re: Make Mine Mature (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (15:20:08)
    I live in hope Tasha, I live in hope...thank you for your beautiful support as always..xx Very Happy Phoebe

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