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Listen

by fogglethorpe

I wait
on the wind,
then whisper;

a secret
crosses courtyards
and oceans;

it finds you,
and kisses
your ear.



Copyright © 2012 by Hugh Lemma- All rights reserved




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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by Ramonez on Friday, June 01, 2012 (06:15:44)
Beauty, Hugh. The 'Crosses courtyards' send shivers... Brilliant.

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Friday, June 01, 2012 (13:06:24)
    Ramonez..many thanks. It's good to hear from you.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by marek on Friday, June 01, 2012 (14:38:29)
Imaginaration of the finest kind, you, well worth a full score.Cheers m

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (01:08:01)
    m..thank you.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (08:41:17)
with a sigh and a smile I have to say this is lovely! simply lovely!

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (08:50:42)
    Hi Bonnie..much appreciated.

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      Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
      by Jayelle on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (12:49:11)
      So few words, yet it stirs curiosity & wonder. What was the secret? Were they lovers worlds apart? An ethereal secret upon the wind. Nice!

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by Jayelle on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (12:50:20)
Oops! I posted in the wrong spot, so I will repost here:

So few words, yet it stirs curiosity & wonder. What was the secret? Were they lovers worlds apart? An ethereal secret upon the wind. Nice!

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (11:44:10)
    Hi Jayelle..yes, I was going for a little mystery. Thanks for the reply.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (14:56:10)
so subtle yet Victorian in romance. Loved it.

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (11:44:42)
    GG..Victorian? I love that. Thank you.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Saturday, June 02, 2012 (15:11:14)
Smartly crafted.

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (11:45:08)
    Glad you liked it. Much appreciated.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (01:47:33)
Charmingly expressed; delightful to read.

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (11:45:41)
    Rory..I'm glad. Thanks for the positive review.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by FräuleinK on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (04:00:16)
H

As
Sure dear is...
Swiftly and slowly
Your movement here
Smudged with romantic
Density
Tunneling and traveling
With love

K

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (11:46:35)
    Hi K..that sounds like a poem itself. Your replies are always so original. Thanks.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Monday, June 04, 2012 (02:10:15)
This is... "love poetry"....makes everyone stop and listen!!!
A definite fav.
D.

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Monday, June 04, 2012 (10:57:29)
    D..I greatly appreciate your continued enthusiastic responses to my work. All the best..-H

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, June 04, 2012 (02:46:34)
Mmmm..this I can absolutely relate to...exquisite writing..but that's you Hugh..Very Happy Phoebe

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Monday, June 04, 2012 (10:58:15)
    Phoebe..thank you. I'm happy that you like it.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by flowergirl on Tuesday, June 05, 2012 (22:09:56)
Beautiful!! Love finds us no matter where we might be or how far apart we are. Very Happy

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Wednesday, June 06, 2012 (12:24:01)
    Hi flowergirl..I like your comment. Thank you.

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Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
by kreemer on Sunday, June 17, 2012 (12:11:42)
...ooo...!

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    Re: Listen (Score: 1 )
    by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, June 19, 2012 (12:44:53)
    Umm..thanks?

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