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Variance Universality

by laitoriat

VARIANCE UNIVERSALITY

Every hush caused a tussle
As when I
On cool shade returned the remorse
And flinged back the handle
Or wished the phantom succumbed
To a fatal strangle

Every gesture beckoned a hussle
And thought I'd
On goodwill rekindled the worse
Brought forth a tumble
So hope the reactionaries get rammed
Eternally with a roaring rumble

Every beneficiary flexed their muscles
So did I
Tried my best not to get a toss
For what they called my 'my mumble'
And declared my woes summed
To hope I never recover from the crumble

Every aspect of yourn caused a sizzle
And I
On every plausible instant thought of your torso
Then make doomed my feet after the stumble
But you'd suggest they get warmed
To sooth them from the aweful stumble

Everyday I visit my castle
That's when I
On strong determination exert my force
Albeit a sprain deep on my ankle
And my castle's yard gets farmed
Part thereof which ye give an amazing ogle




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Re: Variance Universality (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Sunday, June 03, 2012 (16:28:44)
mumble, crumble, sizzle sound nice and effective the way you used them. Be well. Rabbitt

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    Re: Variance Universality (Score: 1 )
    by laitoriat on Monday, June 04, 2012 (04:56:09)
    Dear Rabbitt,
    I highly appreciate that you find the rhyming words effective in their own sense. It's was an endeavour to apply a regular rhyme scheme. Thanks.
    Fond regards. Laitoriat.

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