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been there-done that

by Rabbitt

been there-done that

some who are otherwise wise
say "you will come back again"
back to life afer one dies
to kama-lize every sin

return to a lesser state
than the one you lived before
possibly come back as bait
in a store beside the shore

you could work your way back up
but what could that cockroach do,
crawling up and down your cup,
to earn cock-a-doodle-doo?

but how it is with people
is that we do not revert-
paid our dues under steeple
or maybe didn't convert

evidence shows in the fate
of our strange ontogeny
that will recapitulate
in each one's phylogeny

a scientific treatise
describes fish-like gills and snout
of our young growing fetus
that traces mankind's route

we don't become a critter
we have already been there
and now we're a cloud-sitter
treading where angels don't dare





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Re: been there-done that (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, June 18, 2012 (21:23:36)
I dont believe in God or rebirth ...just good poetry and this is a great example of it Very Happy

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    Re: been there-done that (Score: 1 )
    by Rabbitt on Monday, June 18, 2012 (21:43:41)
    Thank you, rondo. I think skepticism is healthier than outright denial. It takes more faith, energy, and science than we have to be an atheist than it does to be an agnostic. Best from Bob

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