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Poems - mothers black milk
| | mothers black milkby wylde
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razor ripped monkies
play ball in the shed
while loons in the tomb
shriek cartwheeling
splintering their cribs
the holes in their eyes
plead - awaiting to be fed
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Re: mothers black milk
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by graphitegirl on Friday, June 08, 2012 (21:37:32) |
jarring to be sure. Just bit my tongue.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Monday, June 11, 2012 (05:14:13) |
while i gnawed on my mind...
thank you for your read. and for seeing & feeling it.
riteon
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Re: mothers black milk
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by angels on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (14:49:20) |
...in wombed catacombs...
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Monday, June 11, 2012 (05:15:47) |
entombed, rising phoenix to become a rider on the storm. with you @ my wingtip.
mwahs.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, June 14, 2012 (08:38:33) |
esophagus with a plastic fork
larynx with a drastic dork
asparagus better than pork
monkeys fork-dork-pork
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Re: mothers black milk
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, June 14, 2012 (16:27:47) |
Why isn't there a delete button yet? What kind of website like this doesn't have a delete button? I am angry because I said this, believing it to be "humorous" when I first posted it, and now it's going to fly through GP space for eternity. I literally am not as dumb as this post sounds. When a person feels ashamed for an impulsive response (symptom of ASD), and they can't delete the post, it becomes embarrassing. I am not trying to make anybody feel sorry for me when stating my ASD (asperger's syndrome), but ASD patients (even though I'm not a typical Asperger) can be very impulsive people. I wanted to say something later for your heartfelt poem, but was too embarrassed to say anything after writing this post. What does this tell you about the absence of a delete button? Regardless of what GP may or may not think, a delete button is generally a professional aspect for designing websites, because it enables users to delete grammar mistakes, comments they've written updated by sudden research (them being technically wrong when first said), or statements from impulsiveness, let along other things. A delete button is is a necessary function.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Thursday, June 14, 2012 (16:29:26) |
Sorry, not "is is a necessary function." I have bad eyes, and I don't have my glasses on.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Friday, June 15, 2012 (07:26:33) |
hey hey. agreed that having a 'delete' function would be more than helpful.
i took absolutely NO offence to your responses....in fact i more than smiled.
i always appreciate you and what you have to say.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Friday, June 15, 2012 (07:27:39) |
i love what makes you you.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by FuchsiaFestival! on Friday, June 15, 2012 (07:30:39) |
Thanks, I appreciate it. I hope others will not think poorly of it, especially people who consider me "friend."
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Re: mothers black milk
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by KateBurnell on Thursday, June 14, 2012 (14:14:29) |
As you wrote it , I am glad that was yesturday for me. Impossible for it not to go straight to the heart.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Friday, June 15, 2012 (07:29:19) |
the 'healing' continues...15 years on. but the scars will always be there, and can only work to mitigate the damage.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by electrictiger on Sunday, September 09, 2012 (04:23:27) |
Visceral and reads like a literal laceration; leaves a wound on the reader, too.
good stuff.
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Re: mothers black milk
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by wylde on Monday, September 10, 2012 (06:29:23) |
et - thanks for sliding along the razoread.
salute.
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