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Poems - Dawn Clock

Dawn Clock

by Phoebe

Sometimes in the morning early
As the nightime drifts away
Moon still hanging low and pearly
Soon to fade with light of day

Comes the noises of the dawning
Sunlight through my window streams
Trilling birds, a rooster crowing
Weaving life into my dreams

Lying still my bed so warming
Eyes still closed yet wide awake
Smiling as I hear the morning
Picking up my sleep to break

Snuggling down I try to fight it
Whispering "morning go away"
"up you get" it tickles softly
"time to start another day!"

~Phoebe~

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by BrokenWordsPoet on Friday, June 08, 2012 (11:26:39)

I know the feeling and I have a favorite stanza here.

Lying still my bed so warming
Eyes still closed yet wide awake
Smiling as I hear the morning
Picking up my sleep to break

The last line of that stanza is pure awesome... Damn I wish I wrote that line.

BWP... Been so busy That I just come on site to post and have little time to read and glad I had the time to read and rate your poem this morning.

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Friday, June 08, 2012 (15:10:44)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Friday, June 08, 2012 (21:16:58)

Marvellous! Great command of rhyme and meter to paint a truly vivid and charming picture in a most endearing way.

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (07:04:34)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (04:01:23)

"Come on Phoebe wake up, don't miss the best part of the day"
Another great write.

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (07:05:27)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (05:49:46)

Quite alluring.Good use of poetics

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (07:06:22)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Saturday, June 09, 2012 (22:45:49)

I like the playfulness and classic feel, in the style of Emily Dickinson. Have you interviewed her?

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Sunday, June 10, 2012 (00:46:50)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, June 10, 2012 (13:31:25)

" i'll start a revolution from my bed. 'cause the brains i had went straight to my head " - oasis.

i love watching the little birds on a morning.....the hound kicking me in the head, with her " get up and feed me monkey! " look isn't so appealing ha ha - paora.

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, June 11, 2012 (06:09:07)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Monday, June 11, 2012 (00:49:15)

~Phoebe~ ,

this poem so softly rhymes, i can hardly wait 'till tomorrow

great job!

sedubah

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Monday, June 11, 2012 (06:10:14)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Monday, June 11, 2012 (22:14:40)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Tuesday, June 12, 2012 (08:01:51)

Throughout my married years I didn’t wont out get out of bed, but now…how different the change. What a great reminder is your wonderful poem. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Wednesday, June 13, 2012 (03:24:27)

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Re: Dawn Clock (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, July 23, 2012 (19:55:12)

What a cute little write! Lovely rhymes...

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