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Visual Feast

by Phoebe

Ritualistic, hedonistic,
raising glasses high
Sundowners on the deck to watch
The sun exit the sky

With all the pomp and circumstance
And drama of a Queen
Its blazing hot performance
Steals the show in every scene

It goes not softly into night
And yet it’s always known
A dying sun must leave and let
The night ascend the throne

Clouds fade meekly into grey
Outlined in brilliant red
As twilight draws the covers back
And puts the sun to bed.

~Phoebe~




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Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, June 11, 2012 (00:53:26)
poetry for the morning and night ...your muse is busy...nice strophesxoxoxo

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    Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, June 11, 2012 (06:05:09)
    My muse believed in me almost from the moment I came into her life - I call her Mum.... Very Happy xoxoxo

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Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
by rondo on Monday, June 11, 2012 (00:53:55)


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Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Monday, June 11, 2012 (04:12:14)
I enjoyed this one. there's some great lines. I think the third stanza is my favorite.

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    Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Monday, June 11, 2012 (06:06:48)
    Thank you Wayne, that you enjoyed is praise indeed and always appreciated... Very Happy Phoebe

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Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, June 12, 2012 (23:01:36)
G'day Phoebe...
Your writing style is so pleasing to read Phoebe. Always proper rhyme and rhythm.
Thank you Phoebe
Lindsay

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    Re: Visual Feast (Score: 1 )
    by Phoebe on Wednesday, June 13, 2012 (02:50:36)
    You're the kind of welcome guest I'd bake a cake for Lindsay and even let you share my fabulous green tea.. Very Happy Phoebe

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