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fredie is my muse

by poetrylover

Love is the reason
Poetry is the form I most express it
And fredie is my muse
He brings out the words
So bold and true
Some are random poems like this
Others are thought out
And constructed carefully
I express my love for fredie
Through my words on paper
Through words I speak to him
And through the way my body language is
I express it each and every way
He knows I love him
To death and beyond that
He is my muse for the love poetry I've written
Since july of last year
When I realized he was the one
I really loved and not caleb
A month before we became what we are now
We started to hang out
I wasn't as uncomfortable around him
As I was other guys I've dated
Or barely know that well
He made me laugh instantly
And made me blush completely
I knew deep inside my bones
That fredie was my soulmate
I didn't know how to tell him
So in late July
I showed him a poem
That expressed how I felt
It didn't name him specifically
But he knew I meant him
I was single by then
But he was taken
I had to wait for at least 3 weeks
Before he actually asked me out
At first I didn't know what he was saying
Because he was sending one word at a time
August twenty~fourth
Is a day to remember for me
It was the day I truly felt complete
The day when happiness filled my life
The day fredie asked me to be his girl
And I of couse said YES
Because I love him so
He brings a smile to my face
Rosiness to my cheeks
And laughter to my life
He is my one and only muse
For each work of love poetry.





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Re: fredie is my muse (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Monday, June 11, 2012 (00:32:26)
beautiful tribute poetrylover!

check out my piece, "the muse of aurora"

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    Re: fredie is my muse (Score: 1 )
    by poetrylover on Friday, August 24, 2012 (14:17:15)
    thank you very much sedubah =) i really appriciate it. your poem was wonderful.

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      Re: fredie is my muse (Score: 1 )
      by sedubah on Friday, August 24, 2012 (20:43:08)
      poetrylover,

      yester and today i watched again the movie "the red violin"
      'cause i'm becoming a fiddle player in my retirement.

      anyway, there's a scene in the movie, the part set in England
      where the Virtuosa crumbles after his muse (a writer doing her own thing), takes leave for a few months to work on herself.

      His muse comes back home from Russia, after not recieving his daily letters. He had ceased writing to her (just 1 week), gotten
      as high as a kite smoking something, given up on that giving him
      inspiration, and took himself a new muse. His wife got back home
      and caught him playing music in their bedroom, and shot the violin.
      She was mad. He ended up being regretful and left her everything
      at his passing. She still hates that violin to this day.

      The moral of the story is: don't double date muses
      they may mess with your art.

      Sedubah Wink

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        Re: fredie is my muse (Score: 1 )
        by poetrylover on Thursday, August 30, 2012 (11:01:49)
        i am only dating fredie. i hope i only will ever be with him because me makes me feel complete. he is a sweet and kindhearted man. i love him to death just like he loves me

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