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Poems - Fool animal

Fool animal

by jadia4708au

We are surely fool animal
If can’t sense the downfall’s arrival
Even insects and birds sense the danger
Why should we commit something in anger?

We can’t resort to follow dangerous way
Addiction, if you consider, is all the way driving you away
From real life to that of artificial thinking
In fact taking you at the bottom and sinking

Consumption of alcohol can be legal
Some of its consequences may be illegal
Anything taken in excess is bad
That increases frustration and makes you sad

Inner consciousness is real reflection
That shall never allow you to for bad action
But since you are made slave of desires
Nothing good can be accepted by you to admire

It is wrong to assume about the winner
The chances of coming out it becomes thinner
It may certainly kill you from within
What will then be loss or gain?

It is time pass for pleasure
Certain quantities are allowed for sure
If you can control and drive your desires
Nothing may go into flames or on fire

Keep it to self and master the art
You are the person to have good start
Be not at its mercy and succumb
It may otherwise make you to jump

The day may end with tragic death
People may lament death and lay the wreath
For few days you may be remembered
Rest all may be the days to follow and numbered

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Wednesday, June 13, 2012 (10:29:45)

Muzzammil Shah nice poem having fine lines
23 minutes ago · Like

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Wednesday, June 13, 2012 (10:30:43)

Gurmit Singh Sdm You may be Fool but we are not ?
32 minutes ago via mobile · Like

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Wednesday, June 13, 2012 (20:20:03)

Malkeet Kaur Very inspiring and a great social message, could be shared with students of higher class not only to motivate them to abstain from addiction but also to come up with more compositions of their own of this kind. Thanks dear. Will try to share it with my students Smile

9 hours ago via mobile · Like

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, February 18, 2013 (06:24:12)

max Ruth1 hour ago
cool

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, February 18, 2013 (06:24:32)

Good

Daren Waters1 hour ago
Like the imagery and the different subjects tied together.
Comment +1
fools we are

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Re: Fool animal (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, February 18, 2013 (06:24:50)

Good

Daren Waters1 hour ago
Like the imagery and the different subjects tied together.
Comment +1
fools we are

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