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Whoosh!

by kreemer

Catch the fragrance on the suit,
Of the man in the queue in front of you,

Follow the creases as he sits,
Right up to his face,
This time, and notice,

Blue eyes, moustache,
Hair peeking out from under stiff collar,
The man is immediately the foreigner,

Hurling as he is,
The prospect that,
He may ask you to track his trajectory,

Through town, this
City of the big shoulders and,
Lost in the words of the author you are reading,

Compel you to divert your own,
Down the street,

So that you meet,
At the bar,

Where he electrifies his,
Breath with tobacco,

And you accelerate your own,
To find,

That this all happened yesterday, whoosh!

Just yesterday you fell in love.



http://kolembo.wordpress.com/2012/02/05/short-poetry-words-move-edward-hopper-nighthawks-love/




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Re: Whoosh! (Score: 1 )
by Phoebe on Sunday, June 17, 2012 (15:39:03)
mmmmm this is yummy stuff...Very Happy Phoebe

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    Re: Whoosh! (Score: 1 )
    by kreemer on Sunday, June 17, 2012 (16:02:51)
    Thanks!

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Re: Whoosh! (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Sunday, June 17, 2012 (17:26:43)
Interesting, I enjoyed the imagery in it. It's subtle.

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Re: Whoosh! (Score: 1 )
by induce on Monday, June 18, 2012 (09:13:05)
kreemer, I enjoyed your ease of read and flowing visuals. The acceleration and direction capture this, I enjoyed that.

keep penning,

induce

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