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No sense

by jadia4708au

He was drunk and had no sense
Fell down on ground and remained tense
“What will family members think about”? he thought
He could remember and feared actual fall out

People resort to drinking to forget heavy losses
To get fresh ideas on how to manage other sources
It is either love failure or deception from friends
Under all circumstances it is surely leading to tragic end

He had no such compelling ground
He had no grudge against anybody or around
Something worried him for unknown reasons
What would happen to them if he ceases to be a living person?

Hypothetical question and imagined worries
He was under tremendous pressure and carried
It was one sort of anxiety and unawareness
That stuck to his mind and was unable to face

What shall an ordinary man do when faced with fear?
Go for advices from friends or lend the ears?
If not then what is easy option to forget?
Little pegs or two can have pressure to let go

He missed the steps and again dashed to ground
His balance was lost and he could never find
Yet something troubled his mind and he missed a bit
He was violently struck on ground and had head hit

I saw him struggling with whatever strength he had
He was slave of drunken stage and felt very sad
I just extended helping hand for him to regain
He was helpless and could hardly express in pain

I took him to nearby safe place
Where he can escape from vehicle’s chase
It thought of him for a while and felt sorry
Is this the only way to forget the worries?





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Re: No sense (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, June 18, 2012 (20:55:15)
Ching Lee
Alcohol provides temporary respite from reality but in the end it brings dire consequences. Very good narrative!

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Re: No sense (Score: 1 )
by Ego_Rocks2x on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (16:36:18)
Your words are always so wise. I really enjoy reading your words. Take care friend.

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