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Point of no return

by KateBurnell

Scratching the skin
of friends yet made
Grasping their hello
in my hands
as a Hail Mary pass
to my heart
But no it was a greeting
not an invitation
The cigarette shared
on the sidewalk
was not a pact to carry
each others
oxygen tank
The joke which still
causes me to chuckle
echoes back at me
as a taunt
Did I get it?
Distance from where
east to west cross paths
Hollow out my whole self
Where I do not have
a playmate.





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Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
by wylde on Monday, June 18, 2012 (09:50:42)
my saline drip is saltlessly faultless
like scallions or tectonic plates
teared upon whose last supper was served
ruminating with exchanging changes
whilst remaining the same
shaking hands with myself
as i kissed the back of my mirror
ball cringing in nows
cleft pallette

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    Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
    by KateBurnell on Tuesday, June 19, 2012 (10:45:42)
    My heart gulps at your beat. Thank you

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      Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
      by wylde on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (03:58:17)
      no. thank YOU. for what you feel and how you express it. it nourishes me.

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Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (02:02:57)
This is just wonderful!
"The joke which still
causes me to chuckle
echoes back at me
as a taunt
Did I get it?"
love it.
D.

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    Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
    by KateBurnell on Friday, June 22, 2012 (05:56:18)
    Thanks deepali--I appreciate the way you read almost as the way you write-thank you for the sensitivity.

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Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
by doris on Sunday, September 30, 2012 (19:08:50)
I love that part about a pact to carry oxygen tanks, also the Hail Mary pass. Well, on a whole I love it too.

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    Re: Point of no return (Score: 1 )
    by KateBurnell on Tuesday, October 30, 2012 (18:51:57)
    Thank you for commenting. I found this a month later than you posted. It was quite a nice pick me up. kb

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