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Dream-catcher

by kreemer

Here I am,
In a long, low, valley,
On a horse, under sweltering sky.

A single trail runs East to West,
As far as the eye can see.

The sheep-skin bags,
Strung low off the saddle,
Are empty.

Bandits rode into town last week,
And made off with a couple of dreams,

Now I must know,
Which way to go,

I am the Sheriff,
The dream-catcher.



http://kolembo.wordpress.com/2011/03/04/short-poetry-words-move-cowboy-saviour-bandits-western/




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Re: Dream-catcher (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (02:37:21)
I like the surprise: the last two lines

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    Re: Dream-catcher (Score: 1 )
    by kreemer on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (03:30:05)
    Thank you. It's a little hazy, but anytime I try to solidify it, I loose the effect of the last two lines! Glad you enjoyed it!

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Re: Dream-catcher (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (16:33:50)
I'll never think of "dream catcher" the same way again. Nice angle. Rabbitt

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Re: Dream-catcher (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (20:29:22)
Very interesting thought. I enjoyed the flow and the ending very much.

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