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Poems - False Relationship

False Relationship

by angel38

False Relationships

Sad indeed, but this is a basic truth:
A relationship is, based on a condition,
Deceiving roughness, never smooth,
Shallow feelings beyond admission

It has no loyalty and is not true at all.
It is a dreamed sand castle prone to fall,
It is an abandoned life having no bliss,
Covered with sweet expressed with fake kiss

It is empty of fairness and tender touch,
Showered with painful lack of understanding
The passion of selfish desires taken in a rush
Reflects unilateral content, never bending;
Fake relationship breaks a love, true and pure,
With egotistical intentions, I know; I am sure.

Bonding reciprocity is the magic key;
A force forever binding the spirits is noble.
Sincerity is a cozy room where spirits should be
Sharing and caring for each other in a bubble
Where lovers live, forever, their whims and desires
Beyond false relationships, sad and dire,

© - Miguel A. Soto – Stanton, CA. – 20-Jun-2012

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Re: False Relationship (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Wednesday, June 20, 2012 (20:10:11)

This has a good message but needs to be tightened up. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: False Relationship (Score: 1 )
by angel38 on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (12:55:59)

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