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Moon Dance

by doris

He said that my ears were perfect
Just right for whispers
Then lifted me to my feet
To prove it so.




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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by wolfinwindow on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (16:44:51)
A lot said in a small space. enjoyed. Very Happy

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Friday, June 22, 2012 (10:37:27)
    Thank you.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (18:38:20)
so soft and lovely. what a beautiful scene you painted with those words.

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Friday, June 22, 2012 (10:38:01)
    I like the word "soft" to describe this. Thank you.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (21:10:09)
Nice! Rabbitt

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Friday, June 22, 2012 (10:38:21)
    Thanks!

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Thursday, June 21, 2012 (22:24:52)
It's wonderful, Doris.
I love it!
D.

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Friday, June 22, 2012 (10:38:48)
    Thank you. That is so kind of you to say.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Friday, June 22, 2012 (08:12:11)
My wife had those kinds of ears; I’d roll over and whisper I love you… Cool
But she already fell a sleep. Sad No dance tonight. Have a grand tomorrow…Jack Rolling Eyes

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Friday, June 22, 2012 (10:39:19)
    More whispering. More dancing!

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, June 22, 2012 (12:56:04)
small and sweet, well done doris.

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Saturday, June 23, 2012 (10:12:39)
    Thank you, Crow.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Friday, June 22, 2012 (13:04:05)
doris, a real treasure of a small poem - as perfect as her ears!

Sandy

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Saturday, June 23, 2012 (10:13:22)
    Sandy, what a sweet thing to say! Thank you.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Friday, June 22, 2012 (21:03:03)
lovely, left me light on my feet Smile

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Saturday, June 23, 2012 (10:14:06)
    For some reason, graphitegirl, I picture you always light on your feet. Thank you for reading.

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Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
by FuchsiaFestival! on Sunday, October 07, 2012 (00:08:55)
I like it, because it's whimsical.

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    Re: Moon Dance (Score: 1 )
    by doris on Sunday, October 07, 2012 (09:26:08)
    Thank you.

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