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Poems - --Sunset Jogger--

--Sunset Jogger--

by drtmgrt

The night falls swiftly,
And yellow flashes
Of northeastern
Fireflies mark
The edges
Of the
Hedge-lined path,
And gnats
Hang in the air
Like suspended gravel
While my flats
Slap the pavement
Like a murder rap gavel,
In repetition so
Soothing I forget
My sentence
And all that I'm losing,
And everything makes sense,
I feel connected
To the heron
Gliding above
The river
Like messenger
Pigeons follow
The street grid,
Or like a charge down
The neural pathway
That allows
Me to grin
When I realize
I'm not defined
By what's within,
No more
And no less
Than the wilderness
Can be constrained
To the way the wind
Sings its wearisome
Twilight refrain
As the air moves
And spins
Through the spaces
Between the wooden
Masses atop
Parnassus,
I feel the humidity
Flee,
And my breath quickens
As Corycian nymphs
And the nine
Sacred women
Of creation
By man's mind
Surround me and drive
Me to place one
Ancient foot
In front of its partner,
The images they conjure
Like a Reckoner diamond
Encasing me
In a cage of
Liquid iron
While beckoning
Me forward
With 72 hymens,
But I know it's a lie,
I know why
Men fight and die,
And it's not for any
Contrived diatribe
Promoting an
Unattainable
Ultimate prize,
It's to give rise
To the feeling
Of being alive,
That's all we want,
That's all we strive
To find,
And that's why
I'm approaching
Mile five,
And breathing
The life
Inherent in night
With the scent
Of the soundscape
Still burned in
My sight.

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Re: --Sunset Jogger-- (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (07:49:26)

hi, i jog too when I can, but i see that you use sunset in another context, I like the reasoning, I think it is unique to your poem, I run because i want to hear the heartbeats scream back to the world, i guess that is asserting the same reason-that one is alive too
did not realize till today, until i read your poem

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Re: --Sunset Jogger-- (Score: 1 )
by Cherryorchard on Sunday, July 01, 2012 (17:24:59)

This flows brilliantly.

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Re: --Sunset Jogger-- (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Monday, July 02, 2012 (13:42:13)

This moves at a rhythmic pace, as if to simulate running. And the layout..it drops, as if reaching down a roadmap to a destination. Excellent writing, in both craft and insight.

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