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Simple race

by jadia4708au

In morning and in evening I pray
Earnestly fall to his feet to show the way
If at all I am doing anything wrong
Virtually with tears and in religious songs

It is the only way to feel guilty
As we are called children of almighty
We are made by him from simple clay
He is the only one to show us with comfortable stay

We are human being and may err
It is neither folly on our part nor error
But a gamble that every individual takes
In quest for obtaining sweet cake

Sin or no sin yet it is great load
Some of the secrets are not to be sold
They are confessed before almighty
With pure heart to regret and feel sorry

He is there with kind heart
To forgive all our sins for new start
We got to assure him of good conduct
This is known to all with simple fact

I shall stay wherever I am
Nothing should bother me or them
He is merciful and our savior
No one is superior or no one is inferior

Let us live as single entity
Prove your worth with nobility
No one takes you for granted
You lead the life as you wanted

Curse or no curse it is your concern
But forget soon when tides turn
Go before him and confess
Life is to be moved on as simple race





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Re: Simple race (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Monday, July 09, 2012 (20:48:14)
LaSoaphia QuXazs
Yes, it is good to stay whatever you are. But be sorry what we did has no value, that is the teaching of religions. When God created the world, He called it "good", beside he gave us a free will to try out our own short comings. What happens to us, we caused it, but for the reason to learn from it. So, everything is necessary for our own progression. And that can bring happiness, or tragic for us. We have the choice.

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Re: Simple race (Score: 1 )
by jadia4708au on Tuesday, July 10, 2012 (06:17:51)
a good ovation to the almighty, penned in pouring language. now the need of the hour it increase vegetation stop pollution to save ourselves and our progeny.

rm shanmugam chettiar, chennai
Jul 10, 2012

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Re: Simple race (Score: 1 )
by Blinded_Tiger on Wednesday, July 11, 2012 (11:52:31)
I have never met a good man who lived by a concept of sin and atonement. Some did good, but none as a natural part of their lives. False smiles and stern cold eyes a plenty. You could be the first, I can not be the judge of that. But the whole concept is flawed to me.

For a human being to feel empathy, that may or may not lead to doing good deeds, there has to be a fully functional perception of the individuals percieved reality. To this, invisible objects and metaphors does not work well, since empathy is a relation between two peoples percieved reality. No matter the name of the god or object, it is an obstackle in the direct empathic relation between two people. Empathy is a form of perception, or imagined perception.

As you feel, so shall I.

Not: As you feel, so shall I, if "the one" okeys it, else I shall not feel it, but feel this ".." insteed.

The later works in programming computers, but not in a relation between human beings. In my experience Monotheism is a philosophical virus, who often destroys functional empathic humans. When they do good deeds, it is rarely because of the simple relation, heart to heart. But rather for own percieved reality gains. Afterlife, sainthood, sin, atonement, punishment .. the list goes on in that crazy (re)programing language.

Simple race? It is the direct opposite to me, and it a great curiosity that you would name it just that.

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