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Poems - Despite..

Despite..

by deepali

Then there was this you
re-entering my life
out of the blue
and I thought
it was
the most
wonderful feeling
wished
it would continue
wanted
to hold on
only to the feeling
and not you

annoyed
to have waited
for so long
for someone like you
but I did
yes I did
despite of you
I mean
despite you
or rather
in spite of you
oh forget it
whatever..

~deepali

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, July 15, 2012 (16:04:45)

i know this is about as angry as you get in public ali. you don't rant and swear and scream like me. this is the old poem isn't it? it has so much frustration running through it - paul.

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Sunday, July 15, 2012 (18:51:33)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Monday, July 16, 2012 (12:08:09)

Oh my, Deepali... this poem really touched me where I live, poised on the edge of maybe. Love it, my friend - Keep those thoughts coming, Mary Ann

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (01:14:17)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Monday, July 16, 2012 (18:40:20)

Really good poem, a most imaginative way of handling that second stanza!

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (01:16:03)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by MoZark on Monday, July 16, 2012 (21:31:43)

I can see you turning in a huff on that last line. Try to get over it and have a grand tomorrow…Jack

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (01:18:02)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by elixandor on Monday, July 16, 2012 (21:55:41)

Loved it!! It's superb.. Umm... Beautiful... Umm Lovely..ohh forget it..whatever Smile

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (01:21:29)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by zoe_in_a_bubble on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (00:28:32)

I feel you falling. Hope there's a safety net Wink

Well done

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (01:26:26)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (09:14:48)

as I read this imaginative and expressive poem I thought of another song called Reason to Believe...

and still I look to find a reason to believe
someone like you makes it hard to live
without somebody else

excellent write my friend.

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (14:09:56)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by fogglethorpe on Tuesday, July 17, 2012 (15:10:54)

I like the open-ended language and theme. Good stuff, D.

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Wednesday, July 18, 2012 (08:44:56)

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Monday, July 23, 2012 (00:07:29)

G'day deepali...
Revisiting the past can freshen up old habits I guess deepali... and those old habits are maybe the catylist why the revisiting has come about.
Thank you deepali
Lindsay

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Re: Despite.. (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Monday, July 23, 2012 (12:52:01)

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