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BANG!

by MichaelFirewalker

and simultaneous
light thrusts out
every pointless point
with no lines in between
the vibrating tons careen
harmonies into become
as we mighty spinies shout
catch those whirling balls
spinning forth the white
sparks of God while
breathlessly we fall
trying to hold them all
protecting those who dare to be
all-at-once and count love’s
countless invisibilities
ringing like grand old bells
outweighing any possibility
of lasting sin or hell

we listen as they sling
their righteous noble lows
knowing those to be the flow
of first OHM sounds stringing
living universes of joy around
the laughing high-step stairways
leading love pyramidally down
around the dancing ground
where we galactic dragons jig
like diamond-backed sidewinders
the writhing first-find minders
who slither across the hot black ink
heavens life seemed to have forgot
allowing it to lay flat back and watch
our rainbowed dragon scales sweep
connection past replete with light’s shine
released by holy wine vintaged sweet
to mirror all our multi-dimensionality
eternally in wise empyrean skies
of clearest pure reflection




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Re: BANG! (Score: 1 )
by Pujakins on Tuesday, August 07, 2012 (09:01:34)
Mmmm, rich images, maybe I'll get indigestion, need to read a little at a time here. This good poem needs a bunch of reads to sort it out! But seriously, I like the descriptions of creation. Warm wishes, Tasha

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    Re: BANG! (Score: 1 )
    by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, August 07, 2012 (13:38:18)
    methinks what you are saying is valid, Tasha...this type of poem seems to have its own voice, which is very dense and continuous, and that makes it difficult to read, I agree...have written quite a few of these now, and they're all one long complex interweave of sound and meaning...am not sure if that's a positive or a negative...it's just how they happen...and I do value your honest response here...............................thanks, michael

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