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Poems - Done Done

Done Done

by MichaelFirewalker

stayin’ down
sweet and lone

don’ rightly know
you gonna grow
‘fore you run
outa wined
raw-mind birth

but I ain’t comin’
back to first
no more

got no more songs
for ragin’ trolls

can’t fill their leakin'
broken bowls

they set their own
hard asses burnin'
like borrowed paper bones

done sent their sacred ash
hangin’ high
on shallow beams
carved for cash
set mean alone
strung out
then left shark loaned

lately
you been seen
walkin’ dry and old
moanin’ into dead
white cracked feet
since you done gone
cut them fine yella dreads
an’ sold ‘em for
studded alloyed
cold pressed gold
chalked up white
with tuneless beats
you sold for heat
some blood red meat

so now somehow
you ain’t no fun
you got no soul

an’ honey
I am Street
an’ I am done

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Re: Done Done (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Friday, August 10, 2012 (20:15:20)

Someone has disappointed you. I like the images of: broken leaking bowls, walking in dead white cracking feet, cut fine yella dreads. Your poem is colorful with interesting language.

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Re: Done Done (Score: 1 )
by MichaelFirewalker on Wednesday, August 15, 2012 (14:26:48)

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