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This our God

by Gary

This our God
That beats children
Brings disease to women
And hatred to man


This our God
Who kills by gun
Taxes the poor
Pays woman to whore

And so the wheel turns
Upon the pulpit the priest
The sinner and devil
Spirit and holy ghost


This our God
Planes through buildings
Bombs through temples
Limbs of the dead


As the moral face the immoral
And the lies spoken by the devil
Slaughter of human
Upon human upon human


This our God
Who drowns the swimmer
Kills the drinker
Punishes the poorer


Torment in Syria
Famine in Somalia
Quakes in Haiti
The mayhem of militia


This our God





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Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
by Essex68 on Monday, August 27, 2012 (09:45:25)
I use to be agnostic when I was younger, and had respect for anyone who took comfort in a religion and I still do for that matter. though as I get older I tend to think that if there is a god he is probably a sadist. Why would a god who is all powerful and good let inocent people suffer?

Does hell exist
I think it does
We are already here

If I'm wrong then I will answer to him one day, but I'm not holding my breath.

Your atheist friend Wayne

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    Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Monday, August 27, 2012 (10:02:06)
    As you know Wayne I'm a double act
    but one thing I don't pretend is to
    be God. Having said that I want to
    place a job description in the paper
    for God, you know...

    Able to cure the sick
    Stop war
    Prevent earthquakes

    Crikey we need help so
    where our God,
    I am a believer and live in hope

    Thanx for read and great comments
    Eeeee ah I mean Gary

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Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Monday, August 27, 2012 (10:43:13)
What you are saying here is that humans are God. A contridiction in terms if you ask me. However, one could also look at it as,
we are responsible for the future. That all of humanities actions carry a message. And if this is the case, I like it much better.

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    Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Monday, August 27, 2012 (17:03:49)
    Thank you for the good debates
    Mankind needs to lift his or her game
    And appreciate God, we deserve better
    As does God. Thank you!

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      Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
      by butterflyzrfree on Monday, August 27, 2012 (22:09:22)
      i have suffered through tons of very bad things, but like to think that there are also tons of good things in most peoples lives. Call me crazy, whatever,westerners are spoiled (?)

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        Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
        by Gary on Monday, August 27, 2012 (22:16:11)
        Have you watched the series

        Philosophy of happiness
        Alain de bottoin

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          Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
          by butterflyzrfree on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (09:35:43)
          No, but I have studied philosophy all of my life and am very involved with buddhism, and eastern religion, all of which espouses the concept of balance, yin and yang, male and female, good and evil...

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            Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
            by Gary on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (19:12:58)
            I have alot of faith in
            Buddhism too, you are wise
            to follow these eastern religions.
            Jon Kabbat zin is a Good writer
            About this too

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Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
by deepali on Monday, August 27, 2012 (10:47:49)
You've said it all..
They say, God sees the truth but waits...and the wait's really been too long.
Great write!
D.

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    Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Monday, August 27, 2012 (17:04:42)
    No more waiting agreed!!!!!


    Thank you Deepali!!!

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Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
by ossy on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (03:44:35)
a theme as this carves a path in the desert
to lead thoughts gaga.
i must commend your thoughfulness and the insight as well
life is as an ocean leevee where horrible things happen yet some do live in piece. however i think the fated only needs to learn from a fish
or live as most amphibians.
nature is pristine, there's a Supreme influence to her deeds.

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    Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (05:29:33)
    There's alot to write about
    Let's hope a meteor stays away
    So we can work through humanity
    Thank you Ossy

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Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
by Rabbitt on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (19:00:22)
I don't believe in the god you just described either. I hold people responsible. Powerful poem, Gary. Best to you from Bob

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    Re: This our God (Score: 1 )
    by Gary on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (19:07:25)
    Thanks Bob for your good words,
    I'm looking for God everywhere
    I know he's hiding!!

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