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Poems - Dream Dance

Dream Dance

by doNotcallmeJan

I danced
the dream
dance
wet with
the sea foam
emerald
tears of
longing
from behind
your eyes
I whispered
your name
in the dark
you closed
down
drawn within
by a rage
that couldn't
be softened
your flesh
inside me
buried inside
you
I danced
the dream
dance
wet

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Tags: Dance, dream, sea, foam, emerald, longing, tears, eyes, closed

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Re: Dream Dance (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, August 28, 2012 (15:23:01)

Quite excellent visuals, living by the deep blue sea as me? I believe perhaps a few less the's, although I rarely quibble and truly enjoyed your poem. Best wishes, Mary Ann

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