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until

by delapruch

until you publish that book
that they find on the store shelves,
you are not a writer &
until you record that song
that they hear on the charts,
you are not a musician &
until you play that part
that they find in the movie in the
theater,
you are not an actor &
until you pay that money to go to
that college,
you are not a student &
until you go on a diet & buy those
beauty products,
you are not pretty &
until you vote for someone to do
something,
“you have no right to complain” &
until you believe in a “god(s),” a
“spiritual path,” or “a belief in
beliefs,”
then you are not an honest person
(not to be trusted) &
until you accept all this as the only way
to be,
you’ll have a good chance at
happiness.





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Re: until (Score: 1 )
by sedubah on Tuesday, September 18, 2012 (13:24:20)
delapruch,

this poem to speaks of time, the end of things
we have tendency to look at the goal and not enjoy the journey

your poem describes me in the first three lines.
"until you publish that book
that they find on the store shelves,
you are not a writer"

because i am, i do. i'm a self published author
i have more books in boxes than are on store shelves
the books i do sell or person to person
i'm getting ready to submit copyright for my 9th book
when the funds are right, i'll print a modest number of them.
i set my whole book cover to cover using microsoft word
the printer only requires an electronic copy to work with.

i mostly write to get stuff out of my brain worth remembering
so that i can think on new things. i've not written much lately
but have been catching up on my reading. mostly a daily poem
two from gotpoetry poets. i really appreciate you all. now you
all are published authors.

Sedu Bah


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    Re: until (Score: 1 )
    by delapruch on Wednesday, September 19, 2012 (02:43:04)
    @sedubah. As always, thanks for continuing to read! I 'm glad you are writing & self-publishing & insisting on getting it out there at your own pace! : )

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