Gotpoetry Wish

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I wrote this as my solution to my critic poems. Tell me what you think GOOD AND BAD.

Nelson

I think GREAT!!! you did a freaking great job on this poem and expressed all that I would have said had I thought of it. Thank you.

Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Saturday, September 29, 2012 (13:52:16)

A wish to come true in the following months

Nelson


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Very well stated - rhymes are great - and the content, well it speaks for itself. Very, very well done.

Sandy

Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Saturday, September 29, 2012 (17:54:03)

Thanks Sandy My motto is always " Find a Solution" so I write about the good the bad and how to turn my frustration into something workable

Nelson


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Since you explicitly asked for both good and bad feedback, I must say that I don't find this up to your usual standard. While there are some good rhymes, others are weak. The meter often breaks down, there are examples of bad grammar and a lot of it is corny. Sorry. I know you can do a lot better than this.

Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Thursday, October 04, 2012 (22:28:48)

Yes this is the type of feedback that helps. REALLY thank you for these types of comments. I appreciate it very mnuch

Nelson


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Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by Ozymandias on Thursday, October 04, 2012 (22:31:46)

I respect you a lot for being able to take criticism. You might want to consider posting in the forums some time, where you can get more detailed critiques.


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Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Thursday, October 04, 2012 (22:35:30)

Yea I realize this wasn't up to par but I am flattered that you think this work is below standards from previous postings. I will take your suggestion to heart!

Sincerely,

Nelson


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well to be perfectly honest.....Oz is missing the real value of this peace as a glowing endorsement of a site he has helped to make luminate..not to mention 6 quatrains of issue in rhyme that is coherent and on point....I for one am tired of the pigeon hole of so called perfection that sees a particular structure as inferior...and if grammer is a valid issue then there must be "no good Rap....all I'm saying is the quality of this piece Nelson taps new levels of enjoyment in poetry reading....peace

Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Monday, October 22, 2012 (19:49:02)

It was a challenge for people to come up with suggestions instead of complaints. So the complaint from ossy was validated by me because of his referral comment. But I'm totally satisfied with the effect first and foremost the message.

Nelson


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Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by rondo on Monday, October 22, 2012 (19:56:15)

No Ossy wouldnt dane... you mean Ozymandius


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Re: Gotpoetry Wish (Score: 1 ) by nprimemin on Monday, October 22, 2012 (19:56:54)

OOOOOOPs!


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