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Poems - The Garden of Eden


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The Garden of Eden

by Rabbitt

The Garden of Eden

better than you could imagine
enjoying the fruits of the region
like a Florida retirement
a life of ease and content

there's lots of play in your rope
unless you become a dope
and bite more than you can chew
if you do you may be through

the rope becomes a serpent
and takes a bite of you
and you become a servant
looking for something to do

but you are not through
no noose at the end of that rope
Walmart has a place for you
so there is always hope

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Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
by induce on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (11:55:01)
Rabbitt, the 'walmart" connection and how you placed it worked for me.

It is scary, cheers for your words...keep them up.



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    Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
    by Rabbitt on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (12:46:35)
    Yes, it is scary. Thank you induce.

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Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
by Diho on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (12:19:30)
The pendulum
does seem
to swing
the garden
of eatin'
the garden
of eaten.
Nature's way,
I reckon,
of telling
it can't be

Enjoying reading your poems, Bob ~


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    Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
    by Rabbitt on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (12:47:47)
    Yes. Eating and being eaten. Thank you for visiting and reading my poems, Dick. Bob

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Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
by mac on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (20:47:49)
nicely crafted my friend, i sort of have my heart set on a Walmart greeter job when i retire from the day job. Wink


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    Re: The Garden of Eden (Score: 1 )
    by Rabbitt on Sunday, August 11, 2013 (22:10:14)
    Thanks for the smile, Mac. Bob

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