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Poems - A random poem vent (if ya wanna call it that)

A random poem vent (if ya wanna call it that)

by frozen_smoke

I'm just a kid...I'll understand if you hate the poem, but don't be too crude about it.

I want ta vent but there's nothing 2 vent,
some deep inside emotions coming from nowhere.
emotions of sadness, anger, love, happyness,
stuff i can keep under control.
they're all bottled up inside for no reason,
i don't know to get em out cause theres nothing for em.
no cause, no reason, no nothing.
As i walk the halls i feel the emotions,
one by one.
Is it past experiences?
No
Is it my future?
No
So what is the cause of all the emotions?
Growing uP?
Becoming a woman?
Just little things I worry about everyday?
My insecurity?
Possibly that and more...
These emotions can be controlled and some can't be.
I'm just here going through it all,
Too timid to tell anybody.
But yet always giving advice and not using it in my life.
Nobody to hold me accountable or anything like that.
Wrong decisions in my life have been made,
Life swtiches from right to wrong in a second most of the time.
Little wrong descions, nothing majorr,
But they affect the person I am today.
I'm not looking for sympathy,
I'm looking for help and support.

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For a kid (not sure (Score: 1 )
by Huberjack on Friday, August 24, 2007 (16:28:01)

For a kid (not sure how young) you've managed to write down your feelings fairly succinctly. Try to stay away from cliches and come up with your own phrases that give more insight into your state of mind. For example, how else could you say the emotions were "all bottled up"?

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Powerful....Strong e (Score: 1 )
by ceiona39 on Monday, December 10, 2007 (14:08:04)

Powerful....Strong emotion. Gets to the heart of the matter

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