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The Ride

by Temptress

I went for a ride last night and what did I see?
Strangely enough the moon was following me
With the wind in my face and my hair flowing in the air
I couldn't help but to look up and see the stare

Of a quarter moon that was in the shape of a cookie
And the sky in the background as blue as the sea
Once in awhile it looked out of it's place
When the clouds went across it, looked like it had a face

When the trip was over and finally came to an end
I looked up only to see, there was my night time friend
The beautiful moon with it's many shapes and sizes
What it brings every evening has many different surprises





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nice description and (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Tuesday, September 18, 2007 (01:30:05)
nice description and good wordplay

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    nice description and (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Tuesday, September 18, 2007 (08:16:27)
    Thank you Mamta your comment and rating is valued.

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I like this one babe (Score: 1 )
by Lakisha on Wednesday, September 19, 2007 (09:53:42)
I like this one babe

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    I like this one babe (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Wednesday, September 19, 2007 (11:10:10)
    There you are girlfriend,thanks for the comment and rating.

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I can feel the wind (Score: 1 )
by cute1lori on Wednesday, September 19, 2007 (23:40:46)
I can feel the wind blowing on me as I read this and actually see what you are speaking of clearly. A very visual write.

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    I can feel the wind (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Thursday, September 20, 2007 (08:35:06)
    Thank you Lori for the wonderful comment, it was a glorious night for a ride and I do really enjoy the simple things in life.

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i like this one temp (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Thursday, September 20, 2007 (18:14:04)
i like this one temptress
i like going for a ride at night on a nice evening
well wrote and good words

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    i like this one temp (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Friday, September 21, 2007 (08:35:55)
    Thanks Glen,this is the time of year I truely enjoy with the changing of the trees and the briskness in the air.

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your very nice way w (Score: 1 )
by J-SON on Thursday, September 20, 2007 (22:26:13)
your very nice way with words and your strong images make this a terrific read! keep it up! -jeff

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    your very nice way w (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Friday, September 21, 2007 (08:36:41)
    Thanks Jeff for the nice comment.

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Hell yeah! i love th (Score: 1 )
by xXxSYNxXx on Friday, October 19, 2007 (11:20:24)
Hell yeah! i love the moon! very very good one!

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    Hell yeah! i love th (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Friday, October 19, 2007 (11:52:16)
    Thank you for the comment , take a look at the one I wrote called: Me and the moon, it's one of my better pieces and if you like the moon you will enjoy the read.

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i like the feeling o (Score: 1 )
by Bogeyman on Thursday, September 11, 2008 (06:35:00)
i like the feeling of closeness to the moon, had hard time visualizing a quarter moon face, but overall a good write Smile B.

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    i like the feeling o (Score: 1 )
    by Temptress on Thursday, September 11, 2008 (06:51:39)
    Thanks Boris for the comment something about the moon just makes me feel very mellow.

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