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by Trevei13

As these days go bye
I wonder why
my existence started to fly
and why I'm fading so high
I can touch the sky

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Title doesn't fit. P (Score: 1 )
by RZS on Wednesday, August 22, 2007 (16:53:53)
Title doesn't fit. Poem uninteresting as a whole, seems an exercise in rhyme, but does not really speak to me.

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enjoyable work (Score: 1 )
by greygrynn on Wednesday, September 19, 2007 (17:41:30)
enjoyable work

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Very Nice! Love your (Score: 1 )
by spence on Saturday, October 20, 2007 (15:15:20)
Very Nice! Love your avatar- goes with the rhyme! spence

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'As these days go by (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Tuesday, November 13, 2007 (02:18:19)
'As these days go bye'

real good word play!

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there is nothing new (Score: 1 )
by brownbwi on Friday, January 25, 2008 (15:06:29)
there is nothing new to the rhyme used. its glaringly apparent with a short poem such as this one.

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Re: My (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Saturday, November 14, 2009 (18:00:37)
good poem but too many ing words...try making a stronger statement.

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