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Poems - Confetti on the floor

Confetti on the floor

by xXxSYNxXx

You ripped my soul apart until I am no more
Like little pieces of confetti scattered across the floor

As the months, weeks, and days go by
All I can do is hope and sigh

The colors are fading and looking worn
My feelings and emotions are torn

These pieces of me under your feet
Carelessly disregarded, I know I’m beat

As I pick myself up off of the floor
There’s less and less of me, not more

There’s less of me on the floor today
Then there was yesterday

I can see the colors fading
The sadness is invading

When everything I see and hear
Reminds me of what I held dear

12-17-07
by Syn

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Sad. But at the sam, (Score: 1 )
by shay45 on Monday, December 17, 2007 (19:13:30)

Sad. But at the sam,e time very interesting. Are u trying to say something else here.I think you are. but you hide it very well. brilliant poem.
Shay.

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Sad. But at the sam, (Score: 1 )
by xXxSYNxXx on Monday, December 17, 2007 (19:35:21)

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I hate number rating (Score: 1 )
by vexations on Wednesday, December 19, 2007 (06:58:43)

I hate number ratings. When I read your poem I read disregarded as discarded. I think it might have a better flow especially as a song. Very good write.

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I hate number rating (Score: 1 )
by xXxSYNxXx on Wednesday, December 19, 2007 (11:54:41)

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I hate number rating (Score: 1 )
by xXxSYNxXx on Friday, December 21, 2007 (14:39:43)

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I love the title you (Score: 1 )
by Christa on Friday, December 21, 2007 (14:22:42)

I love the title you used for this piece. Talk about wonderful. So much sadness in this poem, yet the title creates a gentle flow for this poem. NICE WORK GIRL!!! Smile

-Much Love and Thanks- Christa Smile

p.s I pray your Blessed beyond all your dreams.

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Very nicely said ,go (Score: 1 )
by Temptress on Saturday, December 29, 2007 (10:26:11)

Very nicely said ,good write SYN.

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