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Poems - You & Me, By The Sea!
| | You & Me, By The Sea!by wickedone
Last night as I fell into a deep sleep a dream came quietly to me. One not in the usual style but one of raw emotion and unashamed beauty , I remember so intricately..
It was by the sea where the waters run deep and the tide slowly ebbs in green blue teal colors with foam bubbles that disappear with my touch. The moon played its music over the waves flowing back and forth not missing a beat.as if connected somehow. The chorus of the water laid out its beauty and its repertoire just for me.
There you were an outline not yet meant to be seen. I am not alarmed no need to be for a calm clear warm feeling of awareness and familiarity surrounds me. I feel warm as the heat from your body consumes me As we walk by the sea your arm around me I feel at home. No better way to describe with such certainty for we are one, you and me. Given time and patience and all things that are of good intentions are just meant to be. .
Your touch so gentle yet burns an imprint upon my skin alas the night is still young Yet all is laid out for us and yet we have only stared into each other eye's. My face is flushed from thoughts of which I care to mention, but choose to share only between ourselves. I have heard dreams play an intricate role in our lives and I know you have mine.. Dreams are a thing of beauty when we dream of love, life and happiness. My wish for you is that you too can share my dreams and together a dream becomes a reality where we choose not to calm the flame but to set the passion on fire that is so honest and real and bears no shame..
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I remember not too l
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by PassionatePoet on Sunday, January 27, 2008 (15:31:57) |
I remember not too long ago before you started writing that you told me you couldn't write, or didn't have it in you, or something to that nature. Oh My, have you come a long way. This a wonderfully full and vivid piece of descriptive writing that portrays the physical and emotional sides of the image. EXCELLENT WORK!!!
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I remember not too l
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by wickedone on Sunday, January 27, 2008 (15:34:33) |
Did I say that? hehe I love writing now THANK YOU for the comment and rating it means a great deal to me; thank you for the vote of confidence. I am grateful; ~W
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I so want to have th
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by graphitegirl on Sunday, January 27, 2008 (23:47:54) |
I so want to have that dream. Enchanting..GG
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I so want to have th
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by wickedone on Monday, January 28, 2008 (05:42:01) |
Thank you very much always grateful and enjoy your comments, rating was great too G. ~W
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tankoowickedoneforbe
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by anna9 on Monday, January 28, 2008 (01:53:57) |
tankoowickedoneforbeautifulwords
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tankoowickedoneforbe
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by wickedone on Monday, January 28, 2008 (05:46:06) |
I am just honored to have such great mentors to learn from all of my friends here at GP; thank you for you comments always and very nice rating; I always appreciate those. ~W
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nice descriptions -
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by mamta on Monday, January 28, 2008 (01:59:27) |
nice descriptions - very vivid
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nice descriptions -
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by wickedone on Monday, January 28, 2008 (05:48:26) |
Thank you mamta for commenting and rating my poetry. I am an admirer of your work its awesome to say the least. ~W
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Another lovely addit
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by Nolip on Monday, January 28, 2008 (08:28:54) |
Another lovely addition to the "unrequited love" genre...
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Another lovely addit
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by wickedone on Tuesday, January 29, 2008 (17:25:06) |
I know I have to try another subject its just this subject comes easy to me. Thank you for your comment and very nice rating much appreciated as always....Wanda
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Love the vivid descr
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by Temptress on Monday, January 28, 2008 (09:39:41) |
Love the vivid descriptions of this poem, good write Wanda.
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Love the vivid descr
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by wickedone on Tuesday, January 29, 2008 (17:27:04) |
I am trying hard to reach a little I have such great mentors here at GP. Thank you I appreciate your taking the time to read and give me such a generous rating. Sincerely, Wanda
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awww shameless love.
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by questionajourney on Tuesday, January 29, 2008 (22:08:24) |
awww shameless love..right on wickedone_Qvek
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awww shameless love.
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by wickedone on Tuesday, January 29, 2008 (22:58:01) |
aaaww i'm all blushing and everything; thanks for your comment and your rating much appreciated as always!
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Beautiful expression
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by Bogeyman on Saturday, February 02, 2008 (10:28:07) |
Beautiful expression of feelings. Couple of small suggestions in private...  B.
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Beautiful expression
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by wickedone on Saturday, February 02, 2008 (11:33:12) |
Thank You: B~I appreciate you helping me with my poetry; thats the only way I can learn and grow in my own writing skills. I am grateful for your comment and rating; ~W
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