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Lazy Poem

by darkblues

A salt water surge
Causes weep.

A lack of water
Causes famine.

Too much wind
Causes…
This is black and white
Said the preacher to the preached
Understand anything
Minds eyes see everything
A world of chaos-
Quantum physics
Einstein himself refuted it
His own!
Searched for black and white
Theory of Everything failed him
He felt helpless
And so does this poem…

The theory of helplessness……
Do something can’t achieve it
Write it, people misinterpret it
Send it, wrong people get it
Say it…next verse in spite of this-
Piffle says…

Believe in it
Belief
Say it
=
to refute helplessness theory…

riled
poem feels its in denial…

dunno…

some would
call this a lazy poem.





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Re: Lazy Poem
by Anonymous on Sunday, March 07, 2010 (12:41:59)
reality sucksbut at least someone takes a little time to comment that your poem is interesting. of course the reality seems kinna jaded but thats the reality. s

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