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Poems - Does He Love Her?

Does He Love Her?

by vexations

Standing before her
on one foot,
as though surveying
a Renoir,
he is overwhelmed by splashes
of red from her nails,
her lips.
Shifting to level
he is entranced
by her blue, twinkling eyes,

His gaze is one of awe,
not critical. He hears
her hair sweeping
across her shoulder,
as rustling wind blown
across West Texas
fields of barley.

Her words
cool his bare toes
as though dipped in
Box Elder creek’ s flow through
rocks, eddies and fallen limbs.

Her moves
have the grace of cirrus skies,
he thinks
this is my picnic spot,
my settling spot
fit to build a cabin.

Then he knows,
love is here.

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"the settling spot f (Score: 1 )
by Bogeyman on Friday, March 28, 2008 (09:15:38)

"the settling spot fit to build a cabin" - beautiful! Smile

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beaut ! (Score: 1 )
by anna9 on Friday, March 28, 2008 (09:20:53)

beaut !

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A stunning poem, pai (Score: 1 )
by mazblondie on Friday, March 28, 2008 (14:50:03)

A stunning poem, paints a visual picture to rival any renoir!!
marie x

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This is such an eloq (Score: 1 )
by ChopinWood on Thursday, August 14, 2008 (16:47:11)

This is such an eloquent poem, and the imagery is wonderful, and seemingly audible. My favorite line is:

Her moves
have the grace of cirrus skies

Superlatively written, and I will continue to enjoy this poem via my favorites. I am a bit of a romantic, and this is a moving piece. ChopinWood.

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I am far from being (Score: 1 )
by Rebel_Darlin on Sunday, August 24, 2008 (15:07:14)

I am far from being a romantic, but this is so well written, it gives me hope. Reb-

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liked the line, " gr (Score: 1 )
by poetpaul on Saturday, January 24, 2009 (10:10:45)

liked the line, " grace of cirrus skies."

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