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Poems - Still missing you...

Still missing you...

by romeo_blackhearted

Seem like yesterday
You were here in my arms
Listening to the sound of my heart
The beat was strong just as it is now
Missing you I am
With dreams of us at night
And visions of you daily,
How can I move on
When you, my soulmate isn’t here,
I wish you were, but you’re
Somewhere I plan to be one day,
I sit in the bed at times
With tears in my eyes remembering
Standing there, holding your hand
Helpless I was, wishing it was me
And not you, heaven knows just how much
I love you and how much I’m
Missing you now, as your eyes closed
I went to tears grabbing you in my arms
COME BACK, don’t go I need you
And needing you is what I need now
Because my heart still cries your name
Even after a year, my love continues
Your clothes and everything remain
Here in our room
I lay in this very moment
Yes, we will continue our love in my dreams
There you tell me it will be OK
But I hate waking up because with you
Is where I want to be,
I feel your present
I sometimes I hear your voice,
Thank you for your love
Forever mines will be for you,
I miss you my love,
I miss you dearly

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if i understood corr (Score: 1 )
by zhaul on Friday, June 06, 2008 (21:28:00)

if i understood correctly this poem is about someone who died and the voice longs for him-her. If so, then the phrase

Somewhere I plan to be one day,

Isn't proper, death is something you can't plan, so maybe use the word want. dunno, just a thought.

in all the poem has some lines you could take of and add some imagery to compare your feelings and your thoughts. What do you think?

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