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Poems - hey paul mc cartney

hey paul mc cartney

by omegapaf

thanks john paul ringo and george
when i'm down, on your music i gorge
beating the blues with beatles
eleanor rigby, and the girl with kaleidoscope eyes
when all you need is love dies

i want to join sgt peppers lonely hearts club band
when i can't hold your hand
working eight days a week
just to get that daytripper ticket to ride
we can work it out mr kite in strawberry fields
sailing the yellow submarine against the tide

yesterday, when i was feeling sixty four
lady madonna helped me fix a hole in my head to get me back to where i need to go
with a little help from my friends, jude let it be
hello goodbye to penny lane
mc cartney, and lennon make me free
4000 holes in blackburn, lancashire i had to count them all
thanks paul, for catching me when i fall

p.s.sorry about heather mills
hope she stands on a land mine that kills.

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I'm in no way a beat (Score: 1 )
by spence on Monday, April 14, 2008 (13:27:46)

I'm in no way a beatles fan, but the tone of this piece had me hooked- amazing flow to this and I was pleasantly surised to realise that I knew most of the songs you described! As for Heather Mills: apparently as part of their divorce settlement she'd demanded a plane from paul mccartney- the judge ruled in favour of the former beatle saying that he only had to give her a tube of immac for her other leg!

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I'm in no way a beat (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 (06:25:01)

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get back get back Jo (Score: 1 )
by graphitegirl on Monday, April 14, 2008 (16:38:38)

get back get back JoJo. Linda McCartneys first husband..perhaps someone should write one about Pauls x wives..
what would the world have been without them..peace Paul

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get back get back Jo (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 (17:36:26)

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Nicely done, bro.... (Score: 1 )
by Islandgrrl on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 (17:15:54)

Nicely done, bro..... Enjoyed this..thanks for the trip down memory lane..... your Islandsis....Jenni

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Nicely done, bro.... (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 (17:41:49)

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G'day omegapaf... I (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Tuesday, April 15, 2008 (23:57:46)

G'day omegapaf...
I dunno about standing on a land mine that kills...at
least it might have left her with not a leg to stand on.

Lindsay

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G'day omegapaf... I (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Wednesday, April 16, 2008 (20:24:42)

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I loved this. Great (Score: 1 )
by Missy on Friday, April 18, 2008 (18:34:55)

I loved this. Great flow and a great piece to read. Enjoyed the tie-ins to beatle songs and lyrics, gave it a great feel. I really enjoyed this read.
-Melis

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I loved this. Great (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, April 18, 2008 (21:27:24)

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oh i love this, it's (Score: 1 )
by deadalchemist on Saturday, April 26, 2008 (22:39:48)

oh i love this, it's fantastic! imagine all the people who will read this poem, i wonder if you can!!!

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oh i love this, it's (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, April 27, 2008 (20:10:56)

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cranberry sauce - yo (Score: 1 )
by Translantasism on Saturday, May 03, 2008 (00:12:44)

cranberry sauce - your friend mia

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cranberry sauce - yo (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, May 03, 2008 (16:29:28)

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This was so GREAT & (Score: 1 )
by Christa on Tuesday, May 06, 2008 (11:54:55)

This was so GREAT & fun to read!!!! Smile

Every single line was well orchestrated. Your AMAZING BABY!!! ~ Love who you are to me ~ Christa Wink

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This was so GREAT & (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, May 06, 2008 (20:02:20)

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This is very clever (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, May 25, 2008 (03:41:37)

This is very clever Paul.....congrats on the word play.
Cheers......Harry

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This is very clever (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Sunday, May 25, 2008 (17:35:52)

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wow. i really like t (Score: 1 )
by Gonzo_Lives on Friday, June 06, 2008 (02:49:16)

wow. i really like this. words fail me.

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wow. i really like t (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, June 06, 2008 (17:11:05)

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being a great fan of (Score: 1 )
by mamta on Friday, June 06, 2008 (02:54:33)

being a great fan of the beatles, i loved this. i love all their songs.

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being a great fan of (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Friday, June 06, 2008 (17:14:15)

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Oh, Paul, this whole (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Tuesday, July 15, 2008 (17:36:37)

Oh, Paul, this whole poem made me so very cheerful, remembering all those great songs - right up until the end. I do like the fact that you're always right up-front about how you feel. Take care, Mary Ann

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Oh, Paul, this whole (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Wednesday, July 16, 2008 (17:21:46)

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I love this!!!!!!!! (Score: 1 )
by lash570 on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 (19:43:33)

I love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
the beatles are in my genetic make up!

I can play all their songs very well--piano/guitar

I'll mp3 you sometime
this is genius--pure genius!!!!

ps--I'm writing one next--lol

ps- like a lizard on a window pane
looking out to Penny Lane

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I love this!!!!!!!! (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Wednesday, September 24, 2008 (19:55:00)

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I love this!!!!!!!! (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Thursday, September 25, 2008 (20:20:01)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by JPerry1980 on Monday, January 25, 2010 (15:33:08)

(In blind rating/commenting mode) I dig it except for the last lines (the P.S.), the rest of it is a pretty groovy tribute to the band and to the great songs they have created. The last lines just seem to be out of place here and a little crude to boot. Overall, except for the P.S., I dig it. Good use of putting it all together. -- j.

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, January 26, 2010 (00:04:09)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Friday, February 12, 2010 (07:35:15)

Clever!

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, February 13, 2010 (01:30:15)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by butterflyzrfree on Saturday, February 13, 2010 (08:29:57)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by Porrohman on Monday, January 23, 2012 (12:16:50)

Very Good Bungalow Bill - The fool on the hill.

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Tuesday, January 24, 2012 (04:26:13)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by Porrohman on Friday, June 29, 2012 (16:03:53)

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Re: hey paul mc cartney (Score: 1 )
by omegapaf on Saturday, June 30, 2012 (16:29:13)

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