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Give me the chance

by C.BARROW

Sweetheart please give me the chance
for I have only been near you a week
please give us the opportunity to feel this dance
let me show you only to be loved I seek

I give no false promises or unfair intention
thinking of you and your happiness when I am near
to know my girl and have a little attention
is all I will ask so please dont fear

I am yours in what role it is you need
your lover,your best friend and your twin
surely you know I to am thoughtful of you indeed
because I know how badly hurt you have been

All I can say is I do love you as you deserve
and in that I can stay apart from your normal life
I can and do love in stolen moments without reserve
and will never interfere in your role as mother or wife

So what I am saying is I love you this way
that I only need to be held now and then
you know my love for you will always stay
and I never ask for any promise of or when

Only to ask that you give us the chance to know each other
for we have barely touched the surface of what is inside
to you I only do promise I want to be your tender sweet lover
and that from your love I will never hide.........


I love you
your ----y





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I loved this poem. A (Score: 1 )
by pinkigloospaz on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (00:42:44)
I loved this poem. Amazing emotion, and the lines and rhyming scheme. I'm speechless. ( :

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    I loved this poem. A (Score: 1 )
    by C.BARROW on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (13:58:32)
    Thank you so much for reading and rating..This poem is very emotional as it was written to be involving myself and someone I am deeply care for..and I guess the poem expresses so much in the way of my thoughts..Thank you for taking the time to read my writing
    C.B.

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Sweeheart, if you do (Score: 1 )
by B.Parker on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (10:21:26)
Sweeheart, if you don't realize all the chances I'm giving... you need to look again. All I have asked so far is for you to be patient. You can not throw one life away for another, and not expect it to not damage others. And If I did that, what would it say about me? About you? For now, stolen moments is what it will have to be. and I already know you are worth more than that, and it is not fair to you. This does not mean I don't love you. It means I have a conscience.

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Yet another brillian (Score: 1 )
by CharlesJA on Sunday, April 05, 2009 (12:20:55)
Yet another brilliant work Mr.Barrow
You have an amazing knack to discribe the love and feelings... Words from the heart.. Love it...

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