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Poems - For My Grandson (either one :))
| | For My Grandson (either one :))by GrannyDeepSea
It’s so easy to be with you
Even if you have to cry
I can turn your tears to laughter
And I barely have to try
Because Granny knows the secrets
In your little giant heart
With a tickle or a dinosaur
I’ll make your tears depart
You are smiling when I finally leave
Three waters in my sack
And my kisses you are catching
Knowing soon I will be back
To make dino tracks in playdough
Or to learn to tie your shoe
Or to water all your flowers
I so love to be with you
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G'day GrannyDeepSea.
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by liarbird on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (21:08:16) |
G'day GrannyDeepSea...
A lot of warmth and love in your well written poem.
I'm sure when many of your poems are read back to you in years down the track by your grand children, there will be a tear. This poem is love.
Lindsay
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G'day GrannyDeepSea.
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by GrannyDeepSea on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (23:36:03) |
ohmygosh, i bet you're right, Lindsay...wow, i never thought about that...i'm too worried about the astreroid to think past 2012...thank you so much...i'm tearing up now!
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i'm sure this is mor
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by questionajourney on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (21:15:31) |
i'm sure this is more true of you..than one plus two..special granny;) nivek
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i'm sure this is mor
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by GrannyDeepSea on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (23:37:23) |
i'm doing the 30 poems workshop and i'm having fun writing these sweet kind of poems...they're important....like backyardigans, Qev!!! thanks!
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Awesome Write! You m
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by graphitegirl on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (23:21:19) |
Awesome Write! You must get to be with them a lot. your daughter or son's children or one of each?
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Awesome Write! You m
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by GrannyDeepSea on Wednesday, May 07, 2008 (23:38:27) |
my daughter's boys - you can see them if you go to my home page and scroll down...i do so love them...they all live with me! i can't wait to get home! ilymichelle
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so much of warmth an
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by mamta on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (04:45:04) |
so much of warmth and love shines flows this poem.
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so much of warmth an
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by GrannyDeepSea on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (05:29:01) |
from the 30 day workshop...these are fun! oh, and i did so love your cinquain...do we need some new categories?
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Beyond cute.
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by Carnos on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (12:05:34) |
Beyond cute.
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Beyond cute.
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by GrannyDeepSea on Thursday, May 08, 2008 (13:04:24) |
they really are!!!
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A sweet write Granny
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by induce on Friday, May 09, 2008 (13:10:55) |
A sweet write GrannyDeepsea!, really feel good . andYe
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A sweet write Granny
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by GrannyDeepSea on Friday, May 09, 2008 (19:02:17) |
it's all about the grandkids....you're still young yet, aren't you, andYe?
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I must admit to not
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by badmalthus on Friday, May 09, 2008 (21:30:48) |
I must admit to not bein' as close to mine as you are to yours granny....nice.
Cheers.....Harry
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I must admit to not
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by GrannyDeepSea on Friday, May 09, 2008 (23:42:37) |
they're under my roof...it's hard not to be...lol...how many, how old, boys or girls? anyway, its a friendly write from the forums!
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Really quite breath
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by Treagal on Saturday, May 10, 2008 (14:19:10) |
Really quite breath taking GDS  Beautiful and lovely, you do your grandson proud and I can see your very loving. It must be the most rewarding experience to be able to write about love for a family member... I wish I could... Just doesn't come.... anyways, it reminded me of how we as humans are so malleable and moldable by actions. Kudos GDS  T
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Really quite breath
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by GrannyDeepSea on Saturday, May 10, 2008 (22:14:06) |
you're still young yet, right?...if you could have seen what God redeemed, you'd believe in God intantaneously, without question and with awe...age has benefits...why bother with attitude anymore! i do so love your work, my dear!
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Really quite breath
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by Treagal on Sunday, May 11, 2008 (20:02:23) |
Yeah I'm only 19, jaja got a lot to learn I suspect...
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