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Out walking in the rain

by Mandyman

When I'm out walking
in the cold rain,
I see other peoples faces
some happy, some in pain

I look closer
with a whimper I hear
I wonder if it's the rain
or really a tear?

Do people like the rain so much
as a way to hide their crying?
Because of all the pain inside
that makes them feel like dying

So whenever I'm out in the cold rain
I sometimes find myself thinking
about all the pain this world is in
and peoples smiles sadly sinking





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woah that poem was r (Score: 1 )
by mark100 on Monday, July 07, 2008 (17:10:11)
woah that poem was rele good i liked it makes me think about the rain alot and how nice it feels to walk around when im sad always seams to cheer me up good work

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    woah that poem was r (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Monday, July 07, 2008 (19:44:50)
    Thanks Mark, glad you liked it, it's one of my old favourites =)

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Hello Mandy, Very in (Score: 1 )
by maryanns on Monday, July 07, 2008 (21:24:36)
Hello Mandy, Very insightful sentiment, I share your view. A really unique "rain" poem. Thanks for it. Best regards, Mary Ann

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    Hello Mandy, Very in (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (09:28:09)
    Hiya Mary Ann and thankyou too =)

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i like this..you dev (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Monday, July 07, 2008 (21:39:24)
i like this..you developed a sense of sincerity of the well being of others in a very poetic way..well done:) q

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    i like this..you dev (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (09:32:09)
    Thanks Q =D

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I actually love the (Score: 1 )
by Temptress on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (10:28:42)
I actually love the rain because raindrops behind my teardrops then no one ever knows that I'm crying when I go outside, so I know it might sound strange but I wish it would rain. Great write and welcome to GP Mandy

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    I actually love the (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (13:59:27)
    I understand it well ... I was "raining" on the inside when I wrote it. Much of my old poetry was written from empathy in a 3rd sence, so when I read it back to myself I could gain some strength back from the emotion. Thankyou for your comment and your warm welcome =)

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i liked that rain po (Score: 1 )
by Glen on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (15:24:38)
i liked that rain poem ,i also like rain at the right time .welcome to got poetry

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    i liked that rain po (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (15:52:01)
    Hi Glen, Thankyou for your comment & your welcoming me =)

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Very nice indeed Man (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (20:22:21)
Very nice indeed Mandy.....funny....I love the rain.
Cheers......Harry

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    Very nice indeed Man (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 08, 2008 (20:46:49)
    Thanks Harry, I'm glad you enjoyed it =)

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So emotional and fil (Score: 1 )
by kamille_mosberg on Thursday, July 10, 2008 (16:05:46)
So emotional and filled with empathy.Your a strong passionate writer.

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    So emotional and fil (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Friday, July 11, 2008 (01:35:53)
    Thanks Kamille =)

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I could really feel (Score: 1 )
by alexiscuttybuddy on Sunday, July 13, 2008 (21:15:38)
I could really feel the wonder,pain and mystery iin this poem i really i like this one its very good

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    I could really feel (Score: 1 )
    by Mandyman on Sunday, July 13, 2008 (21:27:23)
    Thanks Alexiscuttybuddy =)

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