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Poems - Progress

Progress

by mamta

slides, swings and seesaws
playground filled with kids' laughter
once an old graveyard

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If we are able as sp (Score: 1 )
by Mandyman on Tuesday, July 29, 2008 (10:11:23)

If we are able as spirits to watch over the land we are burried in, I couldn't think of anything I'd prefer as a development of the times to be looking upon! Great write Mamta =)

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If we are able as sp by mamta on Tuesday, July 29

how do you do that.. (Score: 1 )
by questionajourney on Tuesday, July 29, 2008 (15:39:50)

how do you do that..you unlock doors so easily..visions i've had..yet we're strangers...yer good:) vek

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how do you do that.. by mamta on Wednesday, July 30

I'd call that progre (Score: 1 )
by WHMechem on Friday, August 01, 2008 (00:11:24)

I'd call that progress! Thanks, mamta!

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I'd call that progre by mamta on Friday, August 01
I'd call that progre by WHMechem on Saturday, August 02

Very nice mamta..... (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Sunday, August 03, 2008 (01:10:37)

Very nice mamta.....I think graveyards are a waste of good space anyway....LOL
Cheers......Harry

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Very nice mamta..... by mamta on Sunday, August 03

filled with children (Score: 1 )
by yasminpragu on Monday, August 04, 2008 (13:14:54)

filled with children's laughter.... i like that...

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filled with children by mamta on Tuesday, August 05

Perfect words to des (Score: 1 )
by Rex330 on Saturday, September 06, 2008 (07:48:44)

Perfect words to describe the title of this piece. Very well written.

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Perfect words to des by mamta on Saturday, September 06

saw it in the forums (Score: 1 )
by Bogeyman on Monday, September 08, 2008 (00:27:44)

saw it in the forums - liked it there, like it here... good work! Smile

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saw it in the forums by mamta on Monday, September 08

Mamta, Gripping end (Score: 1 )
by Nolip on Friday, October 03, 2008 (17:18:16)

Mamta,
Gripping ending to a lyrical haiku. John

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Mamta, Gripping end by mamta on Friday, October 03

Delightful imagery a (Score: 1 )
by poetpaul on Wednesday, March 25, 2009 (04:00:17)

Delightful imagery at the start. Powerful punchline. Great read.

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Delightful imagery a by mamta on Wednesday, March 25

Re: Progress (Score: 1 )
by ken2shoes on Monday, July 12, 2010 (14:34:52)

Mamta, I absolutely love this - except the title seems dry - like from a history book. The 's' sounds are awesome, the last line is great also.

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Re: Progress by mamta on Monday, July 12

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