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Autism

by Blair_witch

you hold out your hand to me
you have that look in your eyes
I wish I could understand you
but it takes so many tries
I know that you're frustrated
you wish that you could say
everything thats bothering you
but you can't find the way

I understand why your angry
I'd be angry too
It must be so hard
with no one to understand you.
I try to remember "simple's best"
when I talk to you
I try to keep my words short
so you don't get confused

I try to show you pictures
in case you can't find the words
no matter how you communicate
You will always be heard
I may not understand you
But you'll always have my hand
to help you and to guide you
through things you don't understand

I wish the world could see you
for who you really are
you're not your diagnosis
you're my little star...
People judge you 'cuz you're special
'cuz you have your little fits
'cuz you don't like certain textures
cuz you can't deal with it

I wonder how it makes them feel
to judge a child so young?
How can they blame your problems on you?
do they think you're like this for fun?
Yes, you hurt yourself cuz it feels good
you scream and have a fit
you bang your head on the wall,
you're just having fun with it...

maybe thats the way they think
but they're just all naive
exiled by the community
they all want you to leave
they've called you names of evil
for being the way you are
they say that you're the devil
those names aren't going far

Baby, you're not evil
you're not doing anything wrong
you adjust to what you can
and we keep going on
What you are is Autistic
you're a special little girl
For God loved you so much
He gave you your own little world

The one you withdraw to
when life's getting to be too much
when you feel you need a time out
when you can't handle a certain touch
And though you're in that world
most the day and night
sometimes I see a flicker
its the real you trying to fight

Trying to come out and SEE me
trying to show you care
but don't worry about that baby
I know the real you is there
God has granted me patience
I asked for it in prayer
I look past the shell of you
I look past your lost stare

One day you will greet me
and say "mom, I've been inside...
I know you never gave up on me,
but that is no surprise...
For God has told me many times
that you would be the one,
who never gave up hope for me
and would fight until the fight was done"

Until that day comes around,
I'll be right with you
one day you'll open your eyes
to a world that is brand new...
I LOVE YOU!!!!





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Wow. I'm one of the (Score: 1 )
by TheBohemian on Tuesday, January 13, 2009 (20:32:32)
Wow. I'm one of the guilty ones. This is excellent writing on a subject I'd guess you know first hand. Thanks for the moving insight.


Good poem,I loved it (Score: 1 )
by Angeloftheseas on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 (16:47:45)
Good poem,I loved it a lot,and I get what your talking about I know kids with autism,and it's horrible how others treat them


Blair_witch, What (Score: 1 )
by realrhoda on Wednesday, January 14, 2009 (20:58:16)
Blair_witch,

What a wonderful window you provide here.
And I love how you will be taught as well.
That is very true.

realrhoda


that was awesome (Score: 1 )
by lash570 on Thursday, January 15, 2009 (02:08:34)
that was awesome


I seen this poem in (Score: 1 )
by Temptress on Friday, January 16, 2009 (08:52:36)
I seen this poem in the slams and had to leave a comment. I would like to commend you on the strength that is shown in this write and the words are exceptionally spoken. I would rate this a 20 if it were possible. Once again very nicely said BW and good luck in the slam.


Beautiful poem...so (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Friday, January 16, 2009 (14:38:25)
Beautiful poem...so much emotion...and very well expressed...your daughter would love it...definetly a fave...Smile


great title to go wi (Score: 1 )
by ddkwenda on Tuesday, April 21, 2009 (04:11:42)
great title to go with the expressed sentiments and a rich feeling to this


Re: Autism (Score: 1 )
by PinkNeonFlavor on Tuesday, August 03, 2010 (22:33:05)
excellent write. I as a person with Autism (mild to high functionin form, Asperger's,) understand this. this is going into my favorites.

I especially liked

I wish the world could see you
for who you really are
you're not your diagnosis
you're my little star...




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