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Poems - Please Pull Foreward
| | Please Pull Forewardby evanrosen13
Watching particles get eaten by the ceiling fan
A spinning wheel of vibes to comfort a man
The shadow of the bulb shakes to terrify
But sounds can be a film of appealing lies
Or remind you of the past to suck you dry
The cultures king or queen left to die
Honor the brave but not the dirty hands
Building the real structure of these wicked lands
Out of all planets we’ve seen, Earth is crazy
All elements of life. There is no maybe’s
Everything possible, and soon will be done
Learning more opportunity, a risky run
If we know The future, there’s no going back
It’s a sealed fate the fool would be the first to grab
Or a hero, a chance a warrior takes
Three bombs ticking with one as a fake
Decisions can shotgun a city
Innocent or not your dead
Riots multiply by a hundred and fifty
We ate the moldy bread
Like the women ‘demons’ in Salem
Hallucinating off rye bread,
They hung every one of them
Imagine the face while momma hallucinates dead
Is the child’s face silently today
Excuses to tangle a six year old mind
Stop relying on captivity stays
Existence is losing it’s time…
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Very trippy, I digge
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by JPerry1980 on Sunday, February 22, 2009 (13:20:23) |
Very trippy, I digged it. As far as Salem, I always wondered whether or not it was just the hallucinations from the good drugs in the wheat or whether it was something more than what they ate? Hmm... well penned. -- j.
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Very trippy, I digge
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by evanrosen13 on Monday, February 23, 2009 (15:33:42) |
Thank you...Well it's a theory, that the rye bread molded from lack of efficiency to keep it fresh. But the mold holds a chemical that has hallucinogen features, yet would make you sick. So I believe with my heart that rye bread created chaos, not demons. But I feel in my poem I went too graphic, in that part. Those were humans dieing from confusion. But it helped make my point to equal measures.
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Damn nice write Evan
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by badmalthus on Saturday, April 11, 2009 (20:47:13) |
Damn nice write Evan.
Cheers......Harry
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Damn nice write Evan
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by evanrosen13 on Thursday, April 16, 2009 (19:38:04) |
thank you sir, cheers-evan
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Re: Please Pull Foreward
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by 2Bhumble on Thursday, February 18, 2010 (00:47:04) |
Other than a few minute grammatical errors, your thoughts are conveyed brilliantly. Well done, mate.
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