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by misty678

Immersed in sweetest poetry
Swathed in rhyme so sublime
Enraptured in its dearest verse
I bathe myself in rhyme
Caught up in the melody
Compelled to hum along
Wrapped up in the heady tune
Of your poet's song
Romanced by the sway of sonnets
The couplet's purest rise or two
Swept up in metered mesmerism
I lost myself in you

(for Harvey)

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Excellent job! This (Score: 1 )
by Jayelle on Friday, April 17, 2009 (06:48:31)
Excellent job! This flowed flawlessly, as smooth as a gentle brook babbling softly over its well-worn stones. Loved it and will look for more by you. J. PS I just reread this and noticed you repeat the word rhyme in 2 close lines. Perhaps "words" for the first "rhyme" in line 2?

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    Excellent job! This (Score: 1 )
    by misty678 on Friday, April 24, 2009 (14:22:41)
    Thank you for your comment and observing that the word rhyme is repeated..actually these were words of a song which I wrote many years ago....that is why there is a repeat

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Beautiful misty..... (Score: 1 )
by badmalthus on Friday, April 17, 2009 (20:27:02)
Beautiful misty......loved its flow.

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    Beautiful misty..... (Score: 1 )
    by misty678 on Friday, April 24, 2009 (14:20:44)
    Thank you so very much I am happy that you enjoyed it

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Re: Enchantment (Score: 1 )
by poetpaul on Monday, July 06, 2009 (07:09:44)
Lovely opus.

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