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Poems - Hell

Hell

by emn8

Selfish hopeless angry souls
Broken tortured empty holes
Endless bodies transfixed on poles
Works towards its endless goals

Unholy empire built on lies
A black abyss of putrid flies
Hideous beasts of guilty cries
Waits until the sunlight dies

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That is a good creat (Score: 1 )
by draven23 on Thursday, May 21, 2009 (00:50:08)

That is a good creation of the words you chose to use and the "hell" seems so real, thats how you made it feel when i read it. i had to read it twice to grasp the understanding of what you were trying to accomplish. Mission Completed. Keep up the good work.

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That is a good creat (Score: 1 )
by emn8 on Thursday, May 21, 2009 (01:00:04)

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ok this is toooo dar (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, May 21, 2009 (01:12:29)

ok this is toooo dark
had a visual concept ...not to pretty
but thats what u were trying to accomplish...so good job

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ok this is toooo dar (Score: 1 )
by emn8 on Thursday, May 21, 2009 (01:51:18)

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ok this is toooo dar (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Thursday, May 21, 2009 (01:55:32)

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G'day emn8... Fits (Score: 1 )
by liarbird on Friday, May 22, 2009 (02:32:45)

G'day emn8...
Fits the bill for the persecuted folk in certain countries on this earth amn8.
Written well.

Lindsay

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G'day emn8... Fits (Score: 1 )
by emn8 on Friday, May 22, 2009 (11:55:35)

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