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A LOT OF FIRSTS

by dav.smith

I remember when I first met you
you were so afraid
I so much a stranger to you
but you must know I loved you from the first time I saw you
from the first time I cuddled you
and our first kiss meant so much
that was so long ago
now you've gone away
but I still love you as I did back then
nothing will ever take away that memory
or my love, because
I'll always be your dad.





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God, Dave. I'm alrea (Score: 1 )
by Ramonez on Friday, May 22, 2009 (08:36:45)
God, Dave. I'm already preparing myself for the day. Thanks for the reminder, mate Wink

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    God, Dave. I'm alrea (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (02:23:04)
    The best friend you'll ever get.I'm lucky the My boy is a smart bean.But what ever chioces they make you just got to be there.

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Surprise ending! Yes (Score: 1 )
by Jayelle on Friday, May 22, 2009 (17:56:47)
Surprise ending! Yes...there are so many firsts to enjoy~~but maybe you can do it all over again with grandchildren?? Goos job. J.

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    Surprise ending! Yes (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (02:21:29)
    Better not be for another 5-6 yrs. But I am looking forward to the day. dAVE

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I just talked to my (Score: 1 )
by Dreaming-Demon on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (22:36:44)
I just talked to my father for the first in twenty years or so the other day...this is a great poem...well done

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    I just talked to my (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (23:45:13)
    Hope your reunion continues for a very long time. dAVE

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Oooh! Killer last li (Score: 1 )
by HSTeech on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (22:55:11)
Oooh! Killer last line! A good twist. Smile...Teech

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    Oooh! Killer last li (Score: 1 )
    by dav.smith on Saturday, May 23, 2009 (23:46:37)
    It's how I feel, And something everyones been through.thanks for comment and vote.

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A beautiful write, t (Score: 1 )
by JPerry1980 on Sunday, May 24, 2009 (11:43:18)
A beautiful write, truly saying so much in words that which is so difficult to try and say in speech. A great testament of love between a father and a child. I give you major kudos for this one, very well done. -- j.

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