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Poems - Fatal Attraction

Fatal Attraction

by TheOfficalPoet

Beauty's all over her face and eyes. She’s a strong woman but her heart is flooded from tears she cry's. She hides behind a fake smile after the young man asks her to stay for a while.

She says I’m a woman and tries not to show her pain as she looks out the window while the rain hits the frame. She starts to explain why her compassionate soul is stained from his un–satisfied pleasure, love that was coming from him.

She didn’t know how it would feel to be treated like a woman only knew how a man could threaten her because of her beauty he could lose. She was confused between the beauty she has claimed to become a self weapon towards her and from the abuse, so called love he had for her.

Before she could get done speaking about being lied, fucked and not made love to and miss-used. He pulled her from the window, wiped the smeared make up from her cheek and kissed her on forehead, told her it's going to be okay.

As she raised her head they caught eye contact while she kisses my lips softly but quickly. She begins to walk fast towards the door. But he had to do something so he ran swiftly behind her grabbing her hand and started my confessions about how he felt for her and those past conversations.

He’s not that love villain he used to be. He got tired of pretending to be something he wasn’t, he’s not here to use you or mislead your heart in the wrong direction. Your beauty isn’t fatal to him; to him it’s poetry in motion like it has its own punch line or even had the vision to call him as he walked by.

Plus this beauty that she carries had definition and the strong attraction he has for her is eating his heart to pieces every moment he has with her and every comment she made about ten percent trust, weakened dark love that flowed into her heart slowly draining every ounce of love out of her while un-wanted lust between her thighs made her feel taken, all he could do was listen to her and feel sharp pain from every hurtful thing she told me.

She gently rubs my face, stares off into space saying thanking him just for listening and not trying to get any sex action while she was weak. She told him had an invention to come swim in her but in his mind already was on that mission.

Never did he let her know his intentions about what he wanted to do about this attraction that has come upon them. He found out her beauty was fatal.

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Re: Fatal Attraction (Score: 1 )
by Missy on Friday, June 26, 2009 (09:16:43)

Strong write, an attraction fatal indeed in the broken pieces of a used soul. Liked the story line, I would check some of your spelling and grammer to polish it off.
Example from 3rd stanza:
"She was confused between the beauty that she has claim to become a self weapon towards her and from the abuse"
-"that she has claim" doesn't make sense gramatically and confuses the reader, did you mean "the beauty she has claimed to become a self weapon towards her"? As that would run more correctly. There are a few other lines with the "has" that does not connect well, maybe something you can look at. Good write though!
-Melis
(Check out some of my recent entries, if you would like, I would appreciate some feedback) - Thank You

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