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My Puddle To Cry In

by Agapi

Have you ever been confused?
Or felt araw...?
I soak and I sin,
And lose my bliss,
I love and I hate,
Can you relate?

I burn and i'm a time-bomb,
I hold in my feelings and I crasp onto thoughts,
I'm not a saint nor am I a sinner!
I do what I wish and my mind spins like a whirlwind,
Doing what most do,
I hope and I dream,
But nothing comes up that I need...
I'm different from most,
And...
My trapezium bone,
Better known as the wrist,
Hurts from love letters,
Not from cutting my wrist.

Do you understand the meaning of this poem?
Or what i'm trying to say?
Take a second look...
Maybe a third...
Or even a fourth...
'Cause what you think,
And what is the truth...
Is the main difference of the naked eye,
As I dance circles around what you do to rely,
What you see is what you get,
And from me to you,
I say you don't got a clue.

I'm a mystery and i'm a surprise,
But can you guess this one thing?
I love being under the Colorado springs!
Even though I live far from it...
I love warm water,
And the comfort of being hated,
You don't get how that is comfort?
Well what did I say...
I'm a mystery,
Better to say:
I'll be down in history!

So before I end this strange poem,
That you might not get,
Or connect...
And likely to rate down and rain on,
Just give me my puddle to cry in,
'Cause sarcasm can sure be a bitch! Smile





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Re: My Puddle To Cry In (Score: 1 )
by Zbird on Sunday, September 19, 2010 (09:10:09)
I actually like this poem even though it seems you are trying to entice negative remarks and ratings. I don't understand that. A lot of anger comes through with the lines and maybe it's good you get that out in poetry...

the only issue I have with this one is

My trapezium bone,
Better known as the wrist,


are those lines really necessary?

my wrist aches (is more powerful)
Hurts from love letters,
Not from cutting my wrist.

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