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Poems - Dreamt Relief (lyrics)

Dreamt Relief (lyrics)

by Huberjack

The night oppresses my regretful mind
until perception of a dream can start-
I soon behold relationships enshrined
in galleries of existential art.

Chorus:
The walls become
a ceiling's lucid hues,
a dreamt relief
when clashing with the blues.

I haven't managed friendships very well,
and ego shares so much of useless blame,
past comrades speak in voices keen to tell
that guilt produced the man that I became.

Chorus

Artistic walls of confidantes profess
remorse is human, letting you rebound.
I try to wake myself, without success;
my friends in vivid colors gather round.

Chorus

Copyright © 2009 by Jack Huber-
All rights reserved.

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Re: Dreamt Relief (lyrics) (Score: 1 )
by lash570 on Thursday, October 15, 2009 (12:49:19)

1st stanza is a mouthful-
everything else is cool---

the night time incubates my mind
until a dream is born
relationships that I've enshrined
wind up enframed forlorn

their walls become
a ceiling's lucid hues,
a dreamt relief
when clashing with the blues.

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Re: Dreamt Relief (lyrics) (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Friday, October 16, 2009 (23:36:23)

very much enjoyed

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