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Pathetic Life

by sschubert

Copyright ©2009 Stephanie R Schubert

The cleansing begins
The ritual never ends
Banging into your bones

Rittled with bullet holes
Nothing consoles
Bleeding out

Faint is the sound
Evil is all around
Shaking the ground

Silence once again amends
As this pathetic life ends

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Re: Pathetic Life (Score: 1 )
by thewholesoul on Friday, October 16, 2009 (21:51:17)

really enjoyed this one - very deep - and the emotion really comes through. good job, conor

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Re: Pathetic Life (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Saturday, October 17, 2009 (04:55:54)

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Re: Pathetic Life (Score: 1 )
by nerdgirl on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (13:03:36)

I agree with Conor. Very good write.

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Re: Pathetic Life (Score: 1 )
by sschubert on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (13:11:39)

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