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My Ideal Partner

by jo.pree

To be together
Laugh at one another
To Frown upon
And rub my shoulders on

To drive long in the two wheeler
Admire the horizons move further
Walk along the amber sands
And feel the warmth of your hands

To hold back my life from being monotonous
Make it less strenuous
Add some pep and spice
Sometimes with truth, sometimes with lies

To dig my face in to your lap
For a short noon nap
Enjoy some good music
And get nostalgic

To share the thicks and thins
Ups, downs and in-betweens
Be with me forever
Support in each endeavor

I sing this paean to you, my Man
Love me as much as you can





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Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
by oxavier on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 (07:25:21)
After reading this poem, one would think what a waste of time it is if we do not have a companion or a partner, someone who will always be there through our ups and downs. I like the way, you have captured the heart warming moments that is shared with your dearest, very sweetly and emotionally written, i am sure all who read this can feel a sense of bonding towards it............Lovely moments.....lovely memories that life gives us.....Enjoyed this Love piece, the guy is lucky i am sure he will love it after reading and your relationship will grow stronger, closer and more lovable day after day after day..........SUPERB and subtle,,,,

Smile

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    Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
    by jo.pree on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 (10:49:23)
    Thanks you Oswald. Your comments are a real boost to me to grow as a writer. As you said each and every line in this poem is about the subtle emotions that i share with my partner. Loved sharing it with all my buddies at GP Smile.

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Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
by angeroseblue on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 (09:02:58)
this was a joy to read
just so sweet the words in your poem
this is a poem i think i will have to heart

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Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
by immastar on Tuesday, October 20, 2009 (17:33:22)
"To share the thicks and thins" that is the sign of true love Very Happy

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Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
by WordLover on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (15:57:09)
Beautiful words - expressed with love. Great job!

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Re: My Ideal Partner (Score: 1 )
by Ozymandias on Wednesday, October 21, 2009 (22:00:45)
I like the simplicity and honesty of this, which shines through it.

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