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Poems - Cross-Cultural Love
| | Cross-Cultural Loveby thewholesoul
She enters
moving like the gravy pours
dark morena beauty
igniting ocular adore
dressed in nothing more
but candle light and silhouette
his eyes fixated, translating her allure,
dilated their applause.
Brush stroking fingers
she coloured in
his universe of dermis
oversaturating
each awing pore with touch
that would melt a stoney heart
if but a whisper
grazed upon its surface.
Making love
heaven came a little closer
necklacing night
with budding beads of sweat
nocturnal hearts, pounding in binary,
vignetting
the promise of tomorrow
with their sensual embroidary.
Two naked souls
crossing continent and culture
no earthly force
could ever separate again
now that they had found the other
that missing piece of jigsaw
each one searched
a lifetime to embrace.
Side by side
as the hour glass
finally emptied of its meaning
wrapped within the rapture
of each loving, coupled moment,
he knew there could be noone else - no farewells
as they sewed their dreams together
on the fields of pillow talk.
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by Dreaming-Demon on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (06:21:10) |
wow this is great and extremely well written, well done conor 
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (07:46:05) |
cheers D, i know love poems arent your cup of tea (not mine either really)...lol...so thanks a bunch for the kind words. i'll be back to writing about more 'manly' stuff and less of this soppy mush shortly 
take it easy, conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by Dreaming-Demon on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (07:50:45) |
well its good to like a variety....lol for a love poem its an excellent one...  (just dont tell no one in my fortress i said that)  
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (08:04:23) |
with an avatar like that i wouldnt be expecting too much mutiny!! thanks again for the kind words. all the best, conor
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by maryanns on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:26:16) |
Your poem warms my heart to know that love like this exists, described so elegantly by an accomplished poet. Wonderful warm insight shared generously here. Very best wishes, Mary Ann
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (11:31:53) |
you're too kind maryann...but thanks very much, your comments are always appreciated (only the kind ones..lol). best wishes, conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by nerdgirl on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (16:29:40) |
This is beautiful Conor. The last two lines are a perfect ending. Wonderful write!
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (17:20:54) |
thanks very much jenna. as always much appreciated. conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by Liquid_Chaos on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (19:01:13) |
Another beautiful poem, the last stanza really stood out. Great write. L_C
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Wednesday, November 04, 2009 (19:18:35) |
thanks ever so much LC. take good care, conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by BrokenWordsPoet on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (09:35:47) |
This reminds me of the television show... This Is Your Life... Thirty-one years married to a... Cross-Cultural Love... Finding love in differences... Then other times getting your mind just blown away... BWP... James... My sister use to say my brother and women... He loves them all...
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (18:25:43) |
cheers james. thanks very much for dropping bye my friend. take good care. conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by Ozymandias on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (17:12:54) |
Lovely flow of the words, and beautiful imagery in this.
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (18:27:19) |
thanks a million rory - your remarks are always greatly valued. take it easy, conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by badmalthus on Thursday, November 05, 2009 (23:29:26) |
What a wonderful work of words Conor......great love poem.
Cheers.......Harry
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Friday, November 06, 2009 (07:09:05) |
cheers Harry, very much appreciated. conor
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by Disfrazada on Friday, November 06, 2009 (21:08:52) |
This was absolutely beautiful Conor. Very well written my friend. Best wishes.
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Re: Cross-Cultural Love
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by thewholesoul on Saturday, November 07, 2009 (07:50:14) |
thanks so much disfrazada
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